邱蘭茹 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文文法有沒有錯誤~~拜託了~~我非常急

拜託各位高手幫我看ㄧ下文法對不對

還有哪些句子是可以刪掉的

不知不覺就寫超過1500個字元數了

但英文不好 又不知從何刪起

目前字元數有1700多個字~~~很煩惱

拜託了 謝謝

For the impression of EVA AIR, originate neighbor's stewardess' aunt , she is dressed in the uniform of EVA AIR green and always bring a self-confident warm smile on the face and see the figure that she go to work each time, , I can not help fantasizing, today she is to fly to which country, also always embrace to imagine very greatly to the EVA AIR!!

During the period of the university , I joined the academic association activity on the department. The job I was responsible for hold the athletics activity on the department. What makes me suitable for athletics section chief is my friendly attitude, passion to serve people and outstanding communication skills. I worked at MOMO PARADISE for five mouths during the period of university. The constant interaction with people allowed me to use my passion for the service industry, and I really enjoyed the experience. I have an outgoing personality, and I get along well with others at work. Based on my characteristics that I have described, I truly believe I have the capability of being a good air hostess, in which my “tenderness, delicacy and passion”will bring a pleasant experience for the passengers.

I dreamed about becoming a flight attendant, and therefore I also actively make great effort toward this target. In order to maintain my healthy body and good physique, I start exercising of everyday and read the related knowledge of cabin attendant in many ways to promote the professional ability in future.

The EVA AIR has been the best airline of image in my heart, I would be excited to work and would like to establish myself with your team where my skills and enthusiasm will find practical and profitable application, capable of making a valuable contribution to the achievement of your company ‘s long-team goals.

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  • ?
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    My first impression of EVA AIR came from my neighbor. She is an EVA steward. She always has a confident warm smile on the face going to work in her green uniform. I always wonder to know to where she is flying today and want to be like her flying.

    During my university life, I joined the academic association of the department. I was responsible for arranging athletics activities for the department. My friendly attitude, passion to serve people and communication skills had made me suitable for the athletics section chief. I also worked at MOMO PARADISE for five mouths during university. The constant interaction with people helps me to use my passion for the service industry. I really enjoyed the experience. I am an outgoing person and I get along well with others at work. I believe that I am capable of being a good air hostess. My “tenderness, delicacy and passion” will bring a pleasant flight experience to all passengers.

    I want to be a flight attendant so I have made extra efforts to achieve this target. To maintain my healthy body and good physical, I do exercise everyday and read articles about cabin attendants to enhance professional abilities for me.

    In my heart, the EVA AIR is the best airline. I would be excited to work for it. I would build myself into your team where I can put my skills and enthusiasm into applications. I believe that I will be able to make a valuable contribution and help EVA to achieve its long-team goals.

    2008-03-16 00:46:28 補充:

    1457 字

    2008-03-16 14:14:51 補充:

    steward -----> stewardess

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    沒有要刪掉的5564564864684864864864

    Source(s): 8/8/
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