子龍 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

幫我的文章增文 <急>

這是我的演講稿 我希望在長些 增長內容加在第1段後面使第2段變成第3段 增文內容 可以往 自從養了狗後的改變 以及狗狗帶給自己的樂趣 以及跟狗的趣事 內容希望有趣些 拜託了

第一段

I still rememder my fifteenth birthday That day music was floating, and everyone was chatting happily at my birthday party. Suddenly, the lights were turned off, and I was pushed to the stage. I opened my eyes to find one carefully wrapped box in front of me.

I had no idea about what present would be in the box. At the same time, all my friends began to sing birthday songs to me. As soon as I opened the box, out jumped a cute puppy. It was a lovely puppy that I couldn"t help but get attached to it at the first sight. Thanks to all my beloved friends, they realized the dream which was to have a dog as a pet.

第2段

With a view to having a healthy dog, I took my cute puppy to the park after school every day.

Seeing my puppy running happily in front of me, and sometimes playing with chickens were really enjoyable. One day I took it to the park as usual, we played happily on the ground, and my puppy even wagged its little white tail around me. We played and ran for a while. I was tired. Therefore, I found a bench to rest for a while. As I walked closer to the bench and turned back to see whether my little puppy is behide me oh~my It was gone I was frightened because I couldn"t find it in sight. With its collar in my hands, I called out its name loudly, walked everywhere to find where it was. No matter how loudly I called, there was no barking answering me. To my sadness, I had no choice but to give up searching because the sky was getting darker and darker. I walked along with tears in my eye hoping that my little puppy would greet me as I went home. This was the last hope. Suddenly, I heard my puppy barking in front of my house. I was so happy that I rushed to it and hugged it in my arms. I said to my puppy "you made me upset I will be more careful I love you This was the lesson that I learned then.

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    I still remember my fifteenth birthday vividly. That day, music was floating and everyone was

    chatting happily at my birthday party. Suddenly, the lights were turned off, and I was pushed to the

    stage blind-folded. I opened my eyes to find one carefully wrapped box in front of me. I had no idea

    about what present was in the box. At the same time, all my friends began to sing birthday song to me. As soon as I opened the box, a cute puppy jumped out. It was a lovely puppy that I couldn't

    help but get attached to it at the first sight. Thanks to all my beloved friends, they knew that I was the

    only child and tend to be lonely at times. Therefore they realized that my dream was to have a

    pet dog as companion.

    I named my puppy "Snowy" because its fur was as white as snow. With a view to having a healthy

    dog, I took my cute puppy to the park after school every day. Seeing my puppy running happily in

    front of me and sometimes playing with chickens were really enjoyable. One day I took it to the

    park as usual. We played happily and my puppy even wagged its little white tail around me. We

    played and ran for a while. I was tired therefore I found a bench to rest for a while. As I walked

    closer to the bench, I turned back to see whether my little puppy was following behind me. To my

    shock, oh No! My puppy was gone. I was so frightened because I couldn't find it anywhere in sight. With its collar in my hands, I called out its name loudly, walked everywhere to find where it was. No matter how loudly I called, there was no barking to answer me.

    2008-03-08 17:05:08 補充:

    To my sadness, I had no choice but to give up searching because the sky was getting darker and darker. I walked home with tears in my eyes hoping that my little puppy would greet me when I reached home.

    2008-03-08 17:05:28 補充:

    This was the last hope. Suddenly, I heard my puppy barking in front of my house. I was so happy that I rushed to it and hugged it in my arms. I said to my puppy "you made me upset". The puppy seemed to know my fear and worry. It wagged its tail in acknowledgment.

    2008-03-08 17:06:06 補充:

    Life changed after having a puppy. I learned to take care of it and began to show more love towards small animals. I also became a more thoughtful and responsible person and teach others not to abandon their pets.

    2008-03-08 17:06:26 補充:

    Snowy always accompanied me to do my homework. It would sit quietly behind my chair so as not to disturb me.

    After this incident, I became more careful for fear that I would lose Snowy again. I love Snowy very much. Since then, we became even closer and we couldn't bear to be apart for long.

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