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wikki asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

可唔可以幫我check下cover letter~!thx~

Vicky Wong

Rm2006 Po Tai Hse Po Lam Est Tseung Kwan o

Mr Peter Lo

Human resources department

2nd March , 2008

Reference : sales & marketing assistant

Dear Mr Lo,

I am interested in the position of sales & marketing assistant ,which ypu advertised in the recruit website. On 19th Feb 2008.

I am a student in the Institute of Vocational Education (Chan Wai ), and will graduate with a higher Diploma in Corporate Administration in June next year .During my before study , I have gained considerable experience in sering customer and lots of sale & marketing skill through participating in a virtual enterprise project. I am sure that my knowledge should be of benefit to your company .

i sure that my previous experience will be of use to your company .a few years ago, I worked as a part time customer service assistant in Mcdonld and saints-alp teahouse.I promote our company new product and keep a good customer relationship.With strong inter-personal skills and team co-operative skills, I have a keen interest and would pursue my career in sales & marketing field. Enclosed please find a resume giving you details of my personal particulars.

In addition, I always interested in the challenges project , such as hiking and volleyball game .so I believe that I can express my best performance in coordinate with oversea office on shipment arrangement.

I would be grateful if you can arrange an interview so that I can explain my qualifications further. My contact number is 95189507 and I can be reached at any time. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

Vicky Wong

Wong Wik Ki

Encl.

(會唔會太長呢~?)thx~!

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    1 decade ago
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    Dear Mr Lo,

    I am interested in the position of sales & marketing assistant ,which is posted in the recruit website on 19th Feb 2008.

    I am a student of the Institute of Vocational Education (Chan Wai ), and will graduate with a higher Diploma in Corporate Administration in June 2009. In my previous courses, I have gained considerable experience in serving customers and acquired lots of sale & marketing skills through participating in a virtual enterprise project. I am sure that my knowledge will be of benefit to your company .

    My previous experience of working part time as a customer service assistant in McDonalds and Saints-Alp Teahouse also make me suitable for your opening position. I promoted our company's new products and assist to maintain a good customer relationship. With strong inter-personal skills and team co-operative skills, I have a keen interest and would like to pursue my career in sales & marketing field. Enclosed please find a resume giving you details of my personal particulars.

    In addition, I am always interested in the challenges and competitive enivornments, such as hiking and volleyball game. I believe I can express my best performance in coordinate with oversea offices regarding shipment arrangements.

    I would be grateful if you can grant an interview for me to explain my qualifications further. My contact number is 95189507 and I can be reached at any time. I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours sincerely

    Vicky Wong

  • 1 decade ago

    This is just my little suggestion:

    I am a senc6nd year student at the Institute of Vocational Education (Chan Wai) majoring in Corporate Administration and I am applying for the position of position of sales & marketing assistant upon graduation. I feel I am a good candidate for this position because I have a considerable experience in serving customer.

    During my studies, I have been participating in a virtual entreprise project. My previous jobs have ranged from customer serivce to sales and marketing. I like to work in sales and marketing-related field because it sounds interesting to me. At Mcdonald and Saints-Alp Teahouse, I have learned how to promote new product and provide good customer service. I can see the power of inter-personal skills and team spirit, and I would like to bring it to my future career.

    I would be happy to join your company and I feel I am a very good candidate because of my skills in interacting with customers. I very much appreciate your time and consideration, and I hope to hear from your group in the near future. I would be happy if we could have a discussion further.

    Sincerely,

    Vicky Wong

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