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阿祥 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文造句 praise for sharapova

我想寫幾個句子讚美Maria Sharapova

I am attracted by the strength and beauty she shows in every match.

Furthermore,I enjoy watching her playing tennis with all her determination to defeat the rival.

Because her spirit that never gives up, many people loves her,and I am a big fan of her, too.

幫我檢查有無文法上的錯誤,或詞意不順的地方

Update:

如果第三句要用a big fan of 是不是要寫成兩句?用什麼副詞連接比較好?

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  • 艾桑
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    下面是我直接針對你的文法做的小修正 :

    I am attracted by the strength and beauty she has in every match.

    Furthermore, I enjoy watching her playing tennis with all her determination to defeat the opponent.

    Because she never gives up, many people love her, and so am I.

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    建議你可以在她對網球的熱情加以闡述。

    2008-02-28 17:57:10 補充:

    我最後一句寫錯了!!!

    Because she never gives up, many people love her, and so am I.

    改成:

    Because she never gives up, many people love her, and so do I.

  • 1 decade ago

    because of her never give up spirits , many people love her and so do I .

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