阿芸 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

尋找英文翻譯達人,有關獎學金的翻譯自傳?”求大大幫忙”

恩...我因為要申請獎學金,所以...需要英文自傳

雖然有些會翻,但是很不通順,誰能幫我中翻英or修改句子呢??

太感謝了!!

我的名字叫做alice

My name is alice chung.

我今年15歲,而且我國二

I'm fifteen years old and I'm eighth grade.

我就讀花蓮的平和國中

I'm Hualian junior high school student.

我們家有爸爸,祖父母,兩個兄弟,和我

There are father,grandparent,two brothers and I in our family.

我爸爸很努力的在外地工作

(這句不會!)

即使這樣,我也很努力讀書

however,I also study very hard.

不想讓我爸爸失望

(這句不會!)

在學校,我喜歡和同學們打球

I like play basketball with my classmates in school.

在打球時可以增進彼此的情感

(這句不會!)

但是也免不了受傷

but sometimes I hurt myself.

不過我仍然喜歡打球

I still like to play basketball very much.

我最喜歡的科目是英文

My favorite subject is English.

因為我覺得很簡單

because I feel that is easy.

所以我會盡全力在所有的考試

so,I'll do my best on all test about English.

我的夢想是當一位老師

My dream is to be a teacher.

教出許多很棒的學生

Help them and have many great student.

我也想當個美髮師

I also want to be a braber.

因為可以讓很多人變美麗

Because I can change many people is beutifully.

我希望這些願望都能實現

I hope those dreams will realize.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    我的名字叫做alice

    My name is Alice Chung. (OK)

    我今年15歲,而且我國二

    I'm fifteen years old and I'm eighth grade.

    (I'm fifteen years old and I'm in eighth grade)

    我就讀花蓮的平和國中

    I'm Hualian junior high school student.

    (Right now, I am attending Hoping Junior High School in Hualien.)

    我們家有爸爸,祖父母,兩個兄弟,和我

    There are father,grandparent,two brothers and I in our family.

    (My family members include my father, grandparents, two brothers and I.)

    我爸爸很努力的在外地工作

    (這句不會!)

    (My farther is out of town and working very hard. )

    即使這樣,我也很努力讀書

    However, I also study very hard. (OK)

    不想讓我爸爸失望

    I don't want my father to be disappointed at me.

    在學校,我喜歡和同學們打球

    I like play basketball with my classmates in school.

    (I like to play basketball with my classmates in school.)

    在打球時可以增進彼此的情感

    I think playing baskeball with them would help us to improve friendship,

    但是也免不了受傷

    (but sometimes I would get injured.)

    不過我仍然喜歡打球

    I still like to play basketball very much. (OK)

    我最喜歡的科目是英文

    My favorite subject is English,

    因為我覺得很簡單

    (because I think it easy to learn.)

    所以我會盡全力在所有的考試

    so, I'll do my best on all tests in English.

    我的夢想是當一位老師

    My dream is to be a great teacher, (OK)

    教出許多很棒的學生

    then I can teach many great students.

    我也想當個美髮師 (Haridresser=美髮師)

    (I would also like to be a hairdresser.)

    barber = 早期的那種理髮師 比較沒有設計觀念

    因為可以讓很多人變美麗

    (Because I can make people beutiful with great hair styles.)

    我希望這些願望都能實現

    I hope those dreams will realize.

    (I hope one day these dreams can come true.)

    Source(s): myself
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    bluesky 很不錯, 在下只是有一點點意見, 希望可以令版大的文章更好:

    我爸爸很努力的在外地工作

    (My farther is out of town and working very hard. )

    My father works overseas. He is a diligent man.

    即使這樣,我也很努力讀書

    (However, I also study very hard. )

    Although my father is not at home all the time, I can study hard by myself.

    不想讓我爸爸失望

    (I don't want my father to be disappointed at me.)

    I don't want to let him down.

    在打球時可以增進彼此的情感

    (I think playing baskeball with them would help us to improve friendship)

    I can get along better with my friends during ball games.

    但是也免不了受傷, 不過我仍然喜歡打球

    (but sometimes I would get injured. I still like to play basketball very much. )

    I like playing basketball even though I may get hurt sometimes.

    我的夢想是當一位老師 教出許多很棒的學生

    My dream is to be a great teacher, (OK)then I can teach many great students.

    My dream is to be a teacher, then I can train up good students.

    我也想當個美髮師 (Haridresser=美髮師)因為可以讓很多人變美麗

    (I would also like to be a hairdresser.)(Because I can make people beutiful with great hair styles.)

    I would also like to be a hairdresser, because I can make people look great.

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