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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英語話劇劇本 (請幫我看有沒有文法錯誤的地方)

(第一幕)

場景:森林

旁白:Long time ago, there's a idiot.

His name is Billy. He is too

stupid, so he doesn't have any

friends. He is always a lone,

but he likes to go to the forest.

There are many animals there.

One day, the idiot goes to forest.

There are many animals there.

One day, the idiot goes to forest.

There are birds, deers, rabbits beside him.

Suddenly, There's a genius,Pook jumped to him.

傻子:Hi ! The music is great.Would you please to teaching me?

精靈:Ok! No problem. But I am hungry now.

傻子:Wait a minute! Here you are!

精靈:ㄣ~~ delicious! Thank you ! My name is Pook. Nice to meet you.

傻子:My name is Billy. Nice to meet you.

精靈:Do you like it?

精靈:Come on follow me. I will show you something.

傻子:This tree?

精靈:Yes! Go on! Go on!

傻子:Wow! What a lovely duck.

精靈:You can have it. This is a gift for you.

傻子:Thank you very much.

Update:

(第二幕)

國王:Smile! Please smile.

國王:Oh my poor little girl. Why do you never smile ? What’s matter with you?

皇后:Please don’t worry my dear. I have a good idea. Where is the doctor?

國王:Oh yes! Doctor! Doctor! Hurry up!Hurry up!

Update 2:

御醫:I’m sorry. Maybe she is just unhappy.

國王:Get away and never come here again.

皇后:No! I can’t believe. What shall we do?

國王:All right! All right! Don’t cry. Anyway I will do my best.

Update 3:

(第三幕)

場景:大街

旁白:There are many people on this street, is very noisy.

傻子:The princess is so beautiful.She is my dream lover.

路人甲:Look at the dirty man! He wants to married Our princess.

路人乙:Don’t be silly.It’s impossible.

Update 4:

傻子:Yes….they are right, how can I get her? It just a dream

精靈:Don’t be sad my friend. Trust me you can make it.

路人丙:Oh the duck is so cute. May I have a look? Oh ~ The duck is stick on my hands. I can’t put it down. Somebody help me.

路人乙:Cool down! I’m coming!

路人甲:I’m coming! I’m coming!

Update 5:

(第四幕)

場景:皇宮內外

國王: Its noise what’s happening.

公主:It’s very funny .

皇后:Look! she is laughing. My child is laughing .

國王:Thanks God! Take the man in.

侍衛:Yes my lord.

國王:You made my daughter happy. What do you want? I can give everything you want.

Update 6:

精靈:Please keep your words.

傻子:well……I think….I mean……. If you don’t mind………

皇后:Wait a minute ! No I disagree. He is poor and stupid.

國王:Let me see.

公主:My dear father! If you regret Maybe I will never Laugh in my whole life.

Update 7:

國王:Ok! ok! Please don’t do it again. My sweet heart.

傻子:Would you married me?

公主:Yes I do.

精靈:It is wonderful. I told you : trust me you can make it

旁白:So they got married.

謝幕: Evrey body....Thank you very much !!!

Update 8:

分很多次,只好請你們辛苦一點囉 >/////<

Update 9:

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Update 10:

對了,這不是我寫的啦!這是網路上抓的~

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  • 1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    旁白:

    Once upon a time, there was an idiot. His name was Billy. He was too stupid so he doesn't have any friends and he was always alone. But he liked to go to the forest where there were many animals.

    One day, the idiot went to the forest and there were many animals.

    On another day, he went to the forest again. This time, the birds and deer and rabbit came to sit beside him.

    Suddenly, a fairy, Pook, appeared in front of him, playing music.

    第一段的旁白, 應未發生在 "很久很久以前" 所以是過去式. 改了一些地方. Genius 是天才的意思.

    傻子:Hi ! The music is great. Can you please teach me?

    國王:Oh my poor little girl. Why do you never smile? What's the matter with you?

    皇后:No! I can't believe it. What shall we do?

    旁白:There were many people on the street and it was very noisy.

    路人丙:Oh the duck is so cute. May I have a look? Oh ~ The duck is sticking on my hands. I can’t put it down. Somebody help me.

    國王: It's so noisy, what's happening?

    國王:Thank God! Let the man in.

    國王:You have made my daughter happy. What do you want? I can give everything you want.

    公主:My dear father! If you don't keep your promise, maybe I will never be able to laugh again in my whole life.

    小小的文法錯誤不過大致上都沒問題. 希望有幫助!

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  • Anonymous
    5 years ago

    到下面的網址看看吧

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  • Anonymous
    5 years ago
  • 1 decade ago

    1.不是 a lone是 alone

    2.不是 to teaching是 teach

    3.可把ㄣ改成Um

    4.Anyway後面要加,

    2008-02-23 10:21:13 補充:

    是trust me you can do it

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    You have made many mistakes on basic grammar, just to point out a few for

    you:

    1. (x) a idiot ---an idiot

    2. (x) He is always a lone-----a loner.

    3. (x) ----wants to married

    4. (0)--- go to the forest. ---(x)go to forest.

    還有很多Sorry, 不能一一改正. 你英文已有不錯底子子,應

    好好讀完文法.

    Peter

    New Zealand

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