萬歲BL asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我看文法上有沒有錯誤!!

one day,Dorothy and her dog Toto were blown a strange worl

d by a violent gale. Anxious Dorothy Knows if she goes back must to vis

it the Oz and help her to get home. So, Dorothy with the silver shoes and

blessing kisses and Toto began she adventure.

On the yellow brick road, Dorothy meet need brain Scarecrow and want

a heart Tin woodman and want courage Lion, ask Oz to come out they

wish, final they see the Oz but he want they beat wicked witch 拍謝。。

這邊可以幫我媽= =。。

這是本來的文.:有一天 Dorothy和她的狗狗Toto被暴風吹到了不知

名的地方,焦急的Dorothy知道了如果要回去必須拜託Oz,於事Do

rothy帶著女巫給的銀色鞋子跟祝福的穩和Toto踏上了冒險的旅程

一路上Dorothy 遇到了需要頭腦的scarecrow以及需

要心的Tin woodman和需要勇氣的Lion,他們都想拜託OZ來實現他

們願望,最後他們終於見到了OZ可是沒想到OZ還要他們打敗邪惡

女巫材才會實現他們夢想。

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    被暴風吹到了不知名的地方

    ... blown "to" a strange world...

    Dorothy知道了如果要回去必須拜託Oz

    ... Dorothy knows she must request Oz for getting back...

    Dorothy帶著女巫給的銀色鞋子跟祝福的穩和Toto踏上了冒險的旅程

    Dorothy and Toro began "their" adventure with a blessing kiss, the silver shoes the witch gave her.

    (我幫你把原本的句子改過了,你原來那樣要把"she 改成"her")

    Dorothy 遇到

    ... Dorothy "met"...

    需要頭腦的scarecrow

    ... Scarecrow, who needs a brain...

    需要心的Tin woodman

    ... Tin woodman, who needs a heart...

    需要勇氣的Lion

    ... Lion, who needs courage...

    他們都想拜託OZ來實現他們願望

    All of them would ask Oz to fulfill their requests.

    最後,他們終於見到了OZ

    Finally, they met Oz.

    可是沒想到OZ還要他們打敗邪惡女巫才會實現他們夢想

    But unexpectedly, Oz would not make their dreams come true unless they beat the wicked witch.

    Source(s): 哈~改作文~好好玩...
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