奶森 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我修改英文翻譯,關於產品設計的文章

各位英文高手,以下是三篇關於產品設計的短文

中文是原本要表達的意思,英文是我自己打的

可以請高手們幫我修改不適當的地方嗎?

不一定要逐字翻譯,只要意思對,用簡單的說法也可以。

感激不盡阿!!!!

1.此NB是針對25-40歲的男性而設計

在那族群的人通常活躍於商業場合以及領導著流行

所以冷色調和沈穩的造型為此NB的設計特點

此外,運用了RHCM的技術在LCD bezel 和 keyboard cover. 使其看起來像是拋光的表面,就像黑色的水晶

此產品由Quanta Computer生產製造,並銷售至台灣、中國、歐洲、南美洲及中東於不同的品牌。

The design concept is for around 25-40 year-old mature male. People In that aimed group are active in Business and lead fashion of lifestyle. Therefore, cold, simple color and steady form are the features of this laptop. The RHCM tech has put to use for the LCD bezel and keyboard cover. It makes it look like varnished surface, the idea comes form black crystal. The design produces by Quanta Computer, and sales to Taiwan, China, Europe, South of America and Middle East for variety brands.

2.對於此設計概念,其試著營造高等級的歐洲風格

在本體造型部分參考了有名的汽車品牌 AUDI 為設計概念的來源

在設計方向部分,簡單、冷色調與其高級感為此設計的特色

你可以明顯的感覺兩種對比得材質- 金屬以及皮革的結合,

類似汽車的內裝。

當你握在手上時,其營造了非常獨特的觸感。

For the design concept, It’s tried to achieve the high-class and European style. The body-form construction referred the stream curve of famous brand car - Audi for the design base. Also for that orientation, cool, simple and high-end style for the design features; You could obviously feel two contrast material- metal and leather combination which similar as car’s interior. When you hold it in the hand, it creates the outstanding touch feelings.

3.此果汁機的想法來自於『女生的裙子』

曲線的腰身像個迷人的女性

此外,可以發現在蓋子上的手把就像女孩的馬尾

另外在底部為此設計的精神- 就像條裙子似的

在裙子底下,有使用橡膠材質做成的腳

可以吸收震動以減少噪音

The idea for this blender comes form “ lady’s skirt ”. The body shape is curvy, looks like a charm woman. Besides, you could find the handle on the lid is made use of girl’s pony tail. And also on the bottom, is the spirit of the design- looks like a skirt. Under the skirt, there’s feet which made of rubber material that can be absorb the vibration when operated for reducing the noise.

Update:

請問 howiejao

第一段第三行後面it make the surface

make是不是要加s?

感謝你這麼快幫我看

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  • 1 decade ago
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    1.此NB是針對25-40歲的男性而設計

    在那族群的人通常活躍於商業場合以及領導著流行

    所以冷色調和沈穩的造型為此NB的設計特點

    此外,運用了RHCM的技術在LCD bezel 和 keyboard cover. 使其看起來像是拋光的表面,就像黑色的水晶

    此產品由Quanta Computer生產製造,並銷售至台灣、中國、歐洲、南美洲及中東於不同的品牌。

    The design concept is for around 25-40 year-old mature male. People In that group are active in business and leading fashion. Therefore, cold, simple color and steady style are the features of this laptop. Using RHCM technology on the LCD bezel and keyboard cover, it make the surface more varnishing, like black crystal. The design is produced by Quanta Computer, and sales to Taiwan, China, Europe, South of America and Middle East for variety brands.

    2.對於此設計概念,其試著營造高等級的歐洲風格

    在本體造型部分參考了有名的汽車品牌 AUDI 為設計概念的來源

    在設計方向部分,簡單、冷色調與其高級感為此設計的特色

    你可以明顯的感覺兩種對比得材質- 金屬以及皮革的結合,

    類似汽車的內裝。

    當你握在手上時,其營造了非常獨特的觸感。

    For the design concept, It's trying to achieve the high-class and European style. The body-form construction design is based on Audi, the famous brand car. In the design aspect, cold, simple color and steady style are the features. You could obviously feel two contrast materials- metal and leather, just like interior of the car. When you hold it in the hand, it creates the outstanding touch feelings.

    3.此果汁機的想法來自於『女生的裙子』

    曲線的腰身像個迷人的女性

    此外,可以發現在蓋子上的手把就像女孩的馬尾

    另外在底部為此設計的精神- 就像條裙子似的

    在裙子底下,有使用橡膠材質做成的腳

    可以吸收震動以減少噪音

    The idea for this blender comes from “ lady’s skirt ”. The body shape is curvy, like a charm woman. Not only this, you could also find the handle looks like girl’s pony tail. Moreover, the skirt-like bottom is hte spirit of the design. Under the skirt, there’s rubber feet that can absorb the vibration for reducing the noise.

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