A Flower In Winter :)?
Flower In Winter
No particular style :)
© Copyright By Pami Jane Tennant
A dense, icy frost, blankets the ground
Animals hunt for sparsely spaced food,
Many in their dens sleeping, snowbound.
A wintry wind blows 'cross shimmering night
Northern Lights reflected from snow mirrored wood;
and prisms from snowflakes, as in silver moonlight
Fall gentle upon the frozen facade of Earth.
Whilst star sown songs drift from night's sky
Father God orchestrates the first strains of re-birth,
A lone scarlet tulip stands sturdy in Winter's sigh
As Father looks upon it smiling, and says, "It is good."
I pray you enjoyed it. Hugs, Pami Jane ^_^
- The Honest oneLv 41 decade agoFavorite Answer
HI Pami. Once again our mind connects, Even in winter, with it's bitter snow, cold relentless wind, somewhat lifeless, empty and grey, we can find beauty if we really look. Winter is not a time for death, but the preparation of being reborn into a new world. Best wishes. Peter
- 1 decade ago
Good, you used subtle rhyming words and it caught my attention. You should repeat a line at the end to emphasize something that you think is important in this poem.
- DragonflyLv 51 decade ago
Once again my hats off to you!!!! You are awesome!
- QuizardLv 71 decade ago
You are very talented
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
I think it's good.