匿名 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

幫我檢查下面的英文句子~這樣說對不對~哪裡需要改的

我是ㄧ個有趣友善勤勞的人,我平常喜歡做運動跟看書.

I am a funny , friendly, kind and Diligence boy. I often like to do exercise and read.

因為我想挑戰自我、加強我的英文跟認識ㄧ些不同國家的人

Because I wanna challenge myself, improve my English and know some different national person.

我曾經在火鍋店跟冷氣行工作過~

I have worked in hot pot restaurants and air condition shop.

我比較喜歡餐廳飯店跟遊樂園

I prefer restaurant , hotel and amusement park.

大概在7/1

About is July first

當然啦,我之前常常搬重物,現在也常常在健身房做運動,所以我覺得我是個很壯的人

Absolutely , I often move heavy object in the past, and now I often do sport in gym.so I sure A strong I am

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  • 1 decade ago
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    hmm... this is difficult

    let me tell you the simple things first

    I like to exercise and read often. hobby?

    Because I want to challenge myself, improve my English and know people from different nation = country= people of different nationality.

    ... to use because, you must have a REASON, why - because

    i have worked in hot pot restaurants and shops that sell air-conditioner. 1 hot pot shop? many shops?

    around july 1st

    Absolutely , I am used to move heavy objects in the past, and i go to the gym regularly to keep myself strong

    indication of TIME "often" usually comes last. and dont use the same word over and over again,

    i am a funny , friendly, kind and Diligent boy, this is gramatically correct, but we dont write english this way...

    think about it...

  • 1 decade ago

    I change it to be more oral

    我是ㄧ個有趣友善勤勞的人,我平常喜歡做運動跟看書.

    I am a funny, friendly and hard working person. I like exercises and reading.

    因為我想挑戰自我、加強我的英文跟認識ㄧ些不同國家的人

    In order to self-challenge, improving my level of English and meeting people from different nations,~~~(接你做了什麼)

    我曾經在火鍋店跟冷氣行工作過~

    我比較喜歡餐廳飯店跟遊樂園

    I used to work in a hot pot restaurant and an air conditioner shop

    but I prefer the jobs in restaurants, hotels and amusement parks.

    (我想這兩句應該是一起的,你談的都是工作,如果冷氣行還有提供其他的電氣產品也許用 electric shop或比較好)

    大概在7/1

    About the 1st of July

    當然啦,我之前常常搬重物,現在也常常在健身房做運動,所以我覺得我是個很壯的人

    I think I am a strong man, it is not only that I used to carry heavy stuffs but also I often work out at the gym these days.

    Source(s): myself
  • 1 decade ago

    我是ㄧ個有趣友善勤勞的人,我平常喜歡做運動跟看書.

    I am a funny , friendly, kind and Diligence boy. I often like to do exercise and read.--------

    I am a funny , friendly, kind, and Diligence boy. I like to exercise and to read.

    因為我想挑戰自我、加強我的英文跟認識ㄧ些不同國家的人

    Because I wanna challenge myself, improve my English and know some different national person.--------

    I want to challenge myself, to improve my English, and know some different people from different countries.( 把Because放句頭的寫法很複雜,因為你不是想"挑戰自我"所以要"加強我的英文",不然你就寫出下文,如:soI want to do...(sth))

    我曾經在火鍋店跟冷氣行工作過~

    I have worked in hot pot restaurants and air condition shop.--------

    I have worked in hot pot restaurants and air condition shops.

    我比較喜歡餐廳飯店跟遊樂園

    I prefer restaurant , hotel and amusement park.--------

    I prefer restaurants , hotels, and amusement parks.(若不是特定的地點,(如:劍湖山)common nouns(如:旅館)後面都要加"s")

    大概在7/1

    About is July first --------

    About at July first

    當然啦,我之前常常搬重物,現在也常常在健身房做運動,所以我覺得我是個很壯的人

    Absolutely , I often move heavy object in the past, and now I often do sport in gym.so I sure A strong I am -------

    I often move heavy objects in the past, and now I often do sports in the gym.so I think I'm a strong preson.(在"我之前常常搬重物"前面加"當然"有一點怪...)

  • 1 decade ago

    你這些句子是作啥ㄉ?

    "I am a funny , friendly, kind and Diligence boy. I often like to do exercise and read."

    I am a funny, friendly, kind and DILIGENT boy. I often exercise and read.

    1. Diligent= 形容詞; Diligence=名詞

    2. "exercise" 已經是動詞了,不用 "do"

    3. 沒有人講 "often like to"。不是 often 就是 like to

    "Because I wanna challenge myself, improve my English and know some different national person."

    ... and know some one FROM A DIFFERENT COUNTRY.

    美國人通常都說 country.

    "I prefer restaurant , hotel and amusement park."

    這樣說有點奇怪。每個名詞後面加個s就行了

    “大概在7/1” about July first

    Absolutely. (句點) In the past, I often moved heavy objects, and now, I often exercise in gyms. So, I am sure that I am strong.

    2008-01-24 05:25:08 補充:

    @方維:

    "to know some different national of persons." 不對。

    national= 通常是“全國性” 的意思

    Source(s): 自己, 自己 我是華僑生
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