A poem about me in a sense?

Violated

Written by Semper Fi Reborn

Let me check my email,

Perhaps it holds for me good news.

Another violation notice?

Who keeps sending me blues?

Have I not shared my poems,

With all who come to ask?

Why must I lose ten points,

For doing Godly tasks?

Have I made secret enemies?

Who's lurking in the dark?

Who thinks that they will end me?

Or douse my hidden spark?

What I write, I write for pleasure,

In case you didn't know.

So when tempted to report me,

Why don't you let it go?

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    Be proud of those violations

    Make sure you count each mark

    They're signs you're

    Doing God's good work

    And flaming up His spark

    If it weren't for slings and arrows

    This would be a heavenly place

    And then all your writing would

    Be just for heaven's sake

    Instead of what it seems to me

    to be intended for

    And that's to please us who believe

    And open up the door

    For others who have lost their way

    Or think it so unkind

    That you care more about their souls

    Than they care for your peace of mind

    So wear these violation marks with pride

    Letting God be your conscious guide

    To let Christ light shine for all to see

    Keep on scribing inspired poetry

    And smile each time you get a deletion

    You can be sure it hit someone

    right where they were needin'

    to be hit

    Deep in the heart and right between the eyes

    You sow seeds of Truth and Love that cannot be disguised.

    And as SVP - I'm here to say -

    As the Cowardly Lion said when he'd gotten his badge of courage ---

    lemme attem lemme attem

    [I'll wrap em so tight in Love Patch Roll

    They'll just melt into the light and love of Christ]

    Sending Love Peace Harmony to those who oppose

    We truly are blessed by all whom God brings our way today

    It is a beautiful day :)

  • 1 decade ago

    Very good!!!

    I just want to add....

    I wish a candle could be deducted from my age

    every time somebody lodged a violation notice

    For if that was the case, I would have been a baby at this stage

    We must be doing some right

    For with the Word of God as the light

    Somebody is likely to be offended

    If it according to God, only the truth that we rendered

    So stand up straight, your head up high

    Lift your eyes to the sky

    For in us He takes pride

    And soon will fetch us as His Bride

    Never fear of fret

    Pray for those who spitefully ill treat you instead

    That is God's commandment we should do

    That we should love and forget to

    Love covers a multitude of sin

    Although others may try and put you in a bin

    Take heart my friend, Jesus cares

    Although you are willing to lay your soul bare

    Take care and keep up with the good work which God has called you to do.

    Source(s): Just me
  • 1 decade ago

    That is absolutely beautiful. Why oh why would anyone want to deliberately hurt another ? How very unkind.

    You have been such a wonderful part of y/a.

    So encouraging & uplifting. I can only see Covetness. Someone wants what you have been gifted with Semper.

    Jealousy is so sad & evil. ~~~ God Bless You Semper.

    Source(s): jill
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Very good Semper!! But, I have to agree with cayenne on this one! I too, am not very liked be a few. Why? Because we are speaking God's truths and it is just simply ...not politically correct! A new term to silence us!

    Semper, put on your armor of God and let those arrows fall aside! God tells us, "If I am for you, who can be against you?" God is for you, Semper...you are in a battle! So, wear your violations proudly, with the knowledge that your words sparked something in a heart which maybe void of God!

    I too, have my own collection. Even so, I take my marching orders from God...not man! This will bring much against us...however, God is with us and for us!!!

    Keep writing and speaking to hearts! March to HIS tune and He will go before you! ALWAYS!

    Source(s): A heart for GOD!
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  • ?
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    Hi, I know how you must feel when this happens but remember it is the Lord who rewards us. I try and never answer these questions for approval because people usually pick what feels good to their pride any way. That is one reason people can't see their sins, because their hearts flatter themselves.

    I hope you keep on sharing you poems because I know its fun and interesting to a lot of people, including me.

    Teresa

  • Gerry
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Reborn,

    I enjoyed the poem. I for one find it ironic that so many people would scream for their first ammendment right to "Free Speech"; however, on Y!A these same "screamers" act like they are the final jury, judge, and henchman as to what stays and what goes.

    There is plenty I do not agree with from many that post things here - and alot of times I am not in agreeance with you; but, your right to express it supercedes my subjective feelings to censor. I find it ridiculous that so many can "censor" in an invisible manner and even more ridiculous that these same people do so willingly.

    Semper Fi,

    Gerry

    Source(s): Life of a "jarhead" still in the fighting hole.
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I love the poem!

    Brother, the truth is that you speak of things that some know nothing of....They can not comprehend what you speak, and so they out of fear or ignorance judge you...It must mean that what you say to them actually strikes a chord and they in return out of fear want to make it to where you can't make them feel, think, and question their own hearts and beliefs.

    Keep doing God's work, you are doing great!

    Love to you, brother! Love and light be upon you always! ~:0)

    SE

    Source(s): something that helps me when I don't understand things... Light arises in the darkness for the upright (Psalm 112:4). Every judgement blocks the light! - Mary Anne Williamson
  • 1 decade ago

    Very good, very good... you must be hitting a nerve is all I can say, that is why somebody reports you... they are feeling guilty about something and that is their way of getting back at you.... I think your poems are God inspired and great!!! Keep writing them....

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Don't let it get to you Semper. they are probably jealous of your talents and kind words about our God. Keep them coming. God knows what is in your heart. You will be rewarded for your kind deeds and your faith in Him the Almighty. God Bless.

  • 1 decade ago

    Just like folks wanted to keep MLK down,you will face that kind of adversity "here",but just keep on keepin' on. Always remember your SOULdiers will DEFEND your honor,as we all PRAISE God's honor. Very well put poem.

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