題目:unban lifesty lead to obesity in children and adults do you agree?give reasons
lifesty 係指生活方式!! 成條 城市的生活方式會令到孩子/成年人肥胖
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
I think this'd help you a bit in the way you write it... I am a student in australia... so I don't really get much ideas towards this topic... just see if anyone can give their reasons.
okk... first, this is not a composition... it should be an essay writing.
essay writing is kindda tricky to lots of students...
Things mentioned in the essay should relate to the qestion...
and start your essay in this way:
People always argue if urban lifestyle leads to obesity in children and adults or not. I agree to this statement as our lifestyle affects our health.
for the next few paragraphs, you gotta get all your points listed out... for each point, get it a topic sentence and give it a paragraph...
Don't write all your points in one paragraph... it'd be rather messy...
Remember to write a conclusion at the end of the essay. A conclusion that should include all your points, write them in another way... Otherwise, it'd be very annoying.
so here it is, good luck for your essay writing thing...Source(s): Me!!