英文文法達人請進20分

看完請指點出兩篇文章中的錯誤在哪裡,指點一下要怎嚜改會比較好 從小的時候我就養成讀書的習慣,而電腦的普及會對孩子們的學習受到很大的影響,所以我更知道學生們的需要。 I start developing the habit of studying form childhood,The spread out of computers has strong impact on student`s learning,will be subjeced to very great influence to the students learning,Therefore,I know more about what the... show more 看完請指點出兩篇文章中的錯誤在哪裡,指點一下要怎嚜改會比較好


從小的時候我就養成讀書的習慣,而電腦的普及會對孩子們的學習受到很大的影響,所...
I start developing the habit of studying form childhood,The spread out of computers has strong impact on student`s learning,will be subjeced to very great influence to the students learning,Therefore,I know more about what the students demand is。
除了成績以外我更重視培養學生的興趣和品行,讓孩子們在日後為國家付出ㄧ己之力。
Apart from my result,I value more in the cultivation of students interst and character,Which allows children to contribute to the country in near future。
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