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扶林 asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

please teach me the letter's grammer,thanks

Dear Mr. x x

We had received the cheques total 12 pages (the months during form 1/08-12/08), thanks.

About the Parking permit, please bring the old Parking permit and go to the Lobby’s Service of SOUTH TOWER 6 to change the new Parking permit.

Yours sincerely

xxx

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  • ?
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago
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    Dear Mr.xxx,

    We wish to inform you that we received from you twelve(12) cheques between 1st Aug and 12th Aug 2007.

    As to the parking permit, please bring your old parking permit for renewval at the Lobby's service counter inside the South Tower VI .

    Sould you have any quieries please contact Miss xxx at Tel: xx xx xx xx. Thank you for your attention.

    Yours sincerely,

    xxx

    2008-01-15 23:45:29 補充:

    Typing mistake : renewval ---------- renewal

    2008-01-16 07:57:58 補充:

    Correction : As to the parking permit------- As to/Regarding the parking permit, please bring the old parking permit in person to the service counter at the lobby of South Tower VI for renewal before(dd/mm/yy) at any time /during office hour(9:00 AM to 6:00 PM)/at any time.

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  • ?
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    The above letter have no problems !

    But you need to add the address of xxx !

    Hope I can help you !

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