HCHsueh asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

幫我修改英文自傳

My name am He Chenghsueh am the individuality extroverted male

student, the family live Tainan County Taiwan Province, in the family the

member have five also to have an elder brother except the parents

parents with an elder sister, I am situated in the home am old, at

present early morning goes to work in the wonderful US Telegraphic

Transmission subsidiary company, evening takes advanced courses in the

far east scientific and technical university the university

Update:

我叫He Cheng hsueh是個性外向的男生,家住臺灣省台南縣,家中成員有五個除了父母雙親還有一個哥哥跟一個姐姐,我在家中排行老么,目前早上在奇美電子公司上班,晚上在遠東科技大學進修.

補上中文 謝謝

因為我英文超爛的 請各位幫忙了

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  • 1 decade ago
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    真不好意思~ 你用太多逗號 真的是看不太懂ㄝ!

    My name is He Chenghsueh, and I am a student at the individuality extroverted.

    My family lives in Tainan County , Taiwan Province. There are five family members

    in the family the

    member have five also to have an elder brother except the parents

    parents with an elder sister, I am situated in the home am old, 這段完全不知道你想表達什麼意思? 你想說你家有五個成員嗎? 你有姐姐還是哥哥阿 ? 根本看不懂意思 很難幫你改文法

    I go to work at the wonderful US Telegraphic

    Transmission subsidiary company in the morning, and I take advanced courses in the Far East Scientific and Technical University at the evening.

    p.s.

    你可以補充中文意思嗎 ? 不然真的是看不太懂ㄋ! 如果你相信我的話啦~~ 我在美國住十幾年了

  • 1 decade ago

    My name is Hie-Cheng Hsueh. I am an outgoing boy. I live in Tainan County. In addition to my parents, I have one elder brother and one elder sister in my family. I am currently working in Chi-mei Opto-electronic Corp., in the daytime and taking classes in Far-east Technology University in the evening.

  • Jeremy
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    ㄜ...是我英文不好嗎?= =我竟然看不懂...

  • 1 decade ago

    如果是中文名字的話,字母要全部大寫

    以"王大明" 為例

    位置排列是:

    DA-MING WANG

    2008-01-14 01:25:13 補充:

    My name is HE-CHENG HSUEH(我猜想這應該是您的中文名字, 所以我先按照您的暱稱HChsueh幫您修改, 但因為不確定您的正確姓名, 如果有誤, 可以請參考我的意見). I am an individuality extroverted student. My family lives in Tainan County, Taiwan R.O.C.

    There are five people in my family, my paernts, my elder brother and sister and I. I live with my elder brother, but my parents liveds with my elder sister.(關於家庭的這段我是修改成: "我家有五個人, 我父母, 我的哥哥姊姊和我。我和我哥住,但我父母跟我姐住" 如果有翻譯錯誤還請見諒,謝謝)

    I have been lived in my house for a long time.(我已經在家裡住很久了)

    In the early morning, I go to work in the wonderful Telegraphic Transmission subsidiary company, and in the evening, I take courses in the Far East scientific and technical university.(如果是名字,那麼第一個字母要大寫)

    2008-01-14 01:28:38 補充:

    有兩句話的單字被切了...我重打一次

    第二句:

    I am an individuality extroverted student.

    最後一句:

    In the early morning, I go to work in the wonderful Telegraphic Transmission subsidiary company, and in the evening, I take courses in the Far East scientific and technical university.

    2008-01-14 01:30:31 補充:

    最後一句:

    In the early morning, I go to work in the wonderful Telegraphic Transmission subsidiary company,

    and in the evening, I take courses in the Far East scientific and technical university.

    2008-01-14 01:32:33 補充:

    第二句修改

    I am an individuality and extroverted student.

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    2008-01-16 09:40:33 補充:

    以下是我根據您的中文重新修改的

    My name is HE CHENG HSUEH, and I am an out-going man.

    2008-01-16 09:40:50 補充:

    I lives in Tainan County, Taiwan Province.

    There are five people in my family. Excluding my parents,

    there are also one elder brother and one elder sister in my family.

    2008-01-16 09:40:57 補充:

    I am the youngest child in my family. Now, I work in

    Chi Mei Optoelectronics durning the day,

    and study in Far East University to pursue further education.

    公司跟學校的名字是去他們的官網查的

    Source(s): 加油!!希望您的英文可以越來越進步!!, 不要再被切啦!!
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  • 1 decade ago

    看不懂@_@"

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