阿咕咕 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我修正下列文章的文法錯誤

禮拜四要上台,老師要我們不能帶手稿上台

還有如果錯了3個文法,第四個文法錯誤時,就會被告知下台

拜託各位大大了<有中文的地方,請幫我翻成英文>

Today my topic is the kind of music and dances.

There are many kind of music, classical, country and western, hip-hop, jazz, pop, rock and love songs.

Today I will intrude some of them.

Dancing must collocate with music.

Just like Hip-hop is go along with stress dancing.

There are two kinds of Hip-hop, one is new school, and the other is old school. It is well-known.

Old school including LOCKING、POPING、BREAKING、Running man.

saxophone is Jazz的一種樂器

1. Classical jazz

2. Ballet jazz. It collocates with ballet.

3. New jazz 先有了音樂在編舞

4. Hip-hop jazz. It combines both jazz and Hop-hip

5. Funky jazz. It between hip-hop and jazz

6. Latin jazz. Just like samba dancing.

Update:

先謝謝你囉

但是有兩句中文你方便

幫我翻一下簡單的英文嗎

Update 2:

我要報告的主題就是由音樂衍生出來的舞蹈

Update 3:

saxophone is one of music instrument of Jazz.

薩克斯風是JAZZ的一種樂器

請問這樣對嗎

Update 4:

saxophone is a music instrument of Jazz.

還是這樣呢

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    My topic is about different kinds of music and dances

    There are many kinds of music. For example, classical, country and western, hip-pop, jazz, pop and rock.

    Today, I will introduce some of them to you.

    Dancing must collocate with music.

    For example, hip-hop goes along with street dancing.

    Hip-hop can be categorised into new school and old school hip-hop.

    Old school includes locking, poping, breaking, and running man.

    Saxophone is an instrument used in Jazz music.

    1.Classical jazz

    2.Ballet jazz. This collocates with ballet.

    3.New Jazz. Dance moves are formed after the music is created.

    4.Hip-hop jazz. This is a combination of jazz and hip-hop.

    5.Funky jazz. This is a type of jazz that sits between hip-hop and jazz.

    6.Latin Jazz. This is like samba in dancing.

    大概改了你的文法,不過基本上我完全不懂你的TOPIC是什麼。

    太雜了,建議你在整理一下你想說的。

    不然怎麼翻都怪怪的。

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