宜臻 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

有誰可以幫我改這篇英文作文嗎?謝謝!

How to Prepare a Self-Help Trip

Planning a prefect self-help trip oversea with your lover? Please refer to the following suggestions to make your journey easily, safer and successful. First, decide that which romantic country you like to go with your honey. Then, search for some information of this country by internet, magazine or newspaper. Such as: the food, the culture, the transportation, the weather and the lodging. Third, find out which cities are suitable for you. Remember, visit too much cities may take lots of time on the distance. The next step is to arrange the route of travel. It’s easier to do this if you refer to someone’s schedule from internet, magazine or newspaper. Don’t forget to appoint a candle night dinner for your lover. After that, look for the best travel agency to book your flight and hotel and apply for your visa. Before you book the hotel, you can tell the travel agency how much your budget is. Keep in mind, book flight and hotel by a legal travel agency is very important. Then, make a baggage list to pack your luggage effortlessly. Finally, go to the airport easier more than two hours before your flight take-off. Now you are ready to start enjoying your wonderful vocation.

以上是我這次期末的英文作業,想請各位英文好的大大幫我修改一下!最後一句是從學校課本上抄下來的,因為想不到意思類似但比較好的句子,也請各位大大幫我想一下最後一句話(因為不能用課本的句子,不然會0分)~~謝謝大家!

Update:

Ray~~你寫的真好~~

參考資料那裡寫「僕」讓我差點笑出來~~~

因為內容是英文的~~~

而「僕」是日文的.............

看來你跟我一樣~~keroro看很多!

哈哈!

謝謝你喔!

感激不盡!

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Have you ever thought of planning a prefect Self-service trip overseas yourself with your lover? Please read the followings before you make your selections for a trip that's easier, safer and a guaranteed success.

    For setting up where to go and what to do on the trip, first of all, you need to decide which country you like to go with your love one. Secondly, you need to do research about this country either through the internet, magazines or by the newspapers, for things like, the food, the culture, the transportation, the weather and the place to stay. Thirdly, find out the cities that are best suitable for you. Please remember, visiting too many cities may take too much time going back and forth in between places. The next step is to arrange the route of travel. It is easier to do this by refering to the route from people who have done it before and they are available online, in travel magazines as well as in the newspapers. If you are thinking about adding a little spice to your trip, it is always nice to plan a candle light dinner for your lover.

    For the preparation before the trip, once you decided where to go, you need to apply for the visa or permit necessary. You also need to look for the best travel agency to book your flight and hotels. It is strongly suggested that before you book your hotels, tell your travel agency how much your budget is to achieve the best rates and please keep in mind to always book your flight and hotels with a legal travel agency. And then it is all left with only to make a list for the things you need and pack up for your luggages. Last but not least, you need to go to the airport three hours before your flight takes off and you have got everything ready for your vacation of two in wonder land.

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