有誰可以幫我改這篇英文作文嗎?謝謝!

How to Prepare a Self-Help Trip Planning a prefect self-help trip oversea with your lover? Please refer to the following suggestions to make your journey easily, safer and successful. First, decide that which romantic country you like to go with your honey. Then, search for some information of this country by... show more How to Prepare a Self-Help Trip

Planning a prefect self-help trip oversea with your lover? Please refer to the following suggestions to make your journey easily, safer and successful. First, decide that which romantic country you like to go with your honey. Then, search for some information of this country by internet, magazine or newspaper. Such as: the food, the culture, the transportation, the weather and the lodging. Third, find out which cities are suitable for you. Remember, visit too much cities may take lots of time on the distance. The next step is to arrange the route of travel. It’s easier to do this if you refer to someone’s schedule from internet, magazine or newspaper. Don’t forget to appoint a candle night dinner for your lover. After that, look for the best travel agency to book your flight and hotel and apply for your visa. Before you book the hotel, you can tell the travel agency how much your budget is. Keep in mind, book flight and hotel by a legal travel agency is very important. Then, make a baggage list to pack your luggage effortlessly. Finally, go to the airport easier more than two hours before your flight take-off. Now you are ready to start enjoying your wonderful vocation.

以上是我這次期末的英文作業,想請各位英文好的大大幫我修改一下!最後一句是從學...
Update: Ray~~你寫的真好~~
參考資料那裡寫「僕」讓我差點笑出來~~~
因為內容是英文的~~~
而「僕」是日文的.............
看來你跟我一樣~~keroro看很多!
哈哈!

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