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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

Smoking is no fun 請幫訂正文法

每一個人都知道抽煙有害健康

Everyone have known smoking will harm for health.

但是在我們之中仍有許多人抽煙

But there were still many people have been smoking among us.

而且愈來愈多的年青人抽煙,包括許多小學生

furthermore,the smoking young guy become more and more that inclusive of pupil.

抽煙正在危害我國國民的健康,這些人當中很多是我們國家未來的主人翁

Smoking has been failing the health of the people in our country,there has including the future master of our country.

我們再也不能忽視這個問題了

We can not neglect this problem any more.

我們應該支持反抽煙運動

We should support the anti-smoking campaign.

老師和家長若有抽煙應該設法戒煙,或者至少不要在孩子面前抽煙

If teacher and parents have been smoking ought to get rid of it, or at least do not smoking in the presence of the children.

因為大人抽煙會給小孩不好的示範

Because the smoking adult that gives a bad example for children.

另外,政府必須透過電視廣告和報章雜誌讓民眾知道抽煙的害處

Otherwise,the government must announce the bad of smoke that through by TV commercial and newspaper.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    每一個人都知道抽煙有害健康

    Everyone have known smoking will harm for health.

    **Everyone knows that smoking is harmful to our health.

    但是在我們之中仍有許多人抽煙

    But there were still many people have been smoking among us.

    **However, there are still many people keep on smoking among us.

    而且愈來愈多的年青人抽煙,包括許多小學生

    furthermore,the smoking young guy become more and more that inclusive of pupil.

    **More and more young people has become additive to it even the kids from primary schools (elementary schools).

    抽煙正在危害我國國民的健康,這些人當中很多是我們國家未來的主人翁

    Smoking has been failing the health of the people in our country,there has including the future master of our country.

    **Smoking is destroying the public health in our country, including the children of our future.

    我們再也不能忽視這個問題了 我們應該支持反抽煙運動

    We can not neglect this problem any more. We should support the anti-smoking campaign.

    **We can not neglect this problem anymore, and we should support the anti-smoking campaign as well.

    老師和家長若有抽煙應該設法戒煙,或者至少不要在孩子面前抽煙 因為大人抽煙會給小孩不好的示範

    If teacher and parents have been smoking ought to get rid of it, or at least do not smoking in the presence of the children. Because the smoking adult that gives a bad example for children.

    **If teachers and parents have been smoking, they ought to quit it now or at least not to smoke in front of the children, since it would only bring them bad example.

    另外,政府必須透過電視廣告和報章雜誌讓民眾知道抽煙的害處

    Otherwise,the government must announce the bad of smoke that through by TV commercial and newspaper.

    **Therefore, the government should make sure people know about the harmfulness of smoking by running the campiagn on TV commercials or newspaper ads.

    很抱歉 很多句子都不是太通順

    所以我整個改了下

    意思完全沒變

    只是把句法改通順點而已

    有幾句放在一起比較好

    所以也濃縮了一下

    改動的部份請看句前有**的

    希望有幫到哦

    Source(s): Moi:)
  • Ahoo
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    1 decade ago

    每一個人都知道抽煙有害健康

    Everyone have known smoking will harm for health.

    Everyone knows smoking isn't good for health.

    但是在我們之中仍有許多人抽煙

    But there were still many people have been smoking among us.

    Many people smoke.

    而且愈來愈多的年青人抽煙,包括許多小學生

    furthermore,the smoking young guy become more and more that inclusive of pupil.

    More and more teenagers start to smoke, even as young as school childrent of elementary school.

    抽煙正在危害我國國民的健康,這些人當中很多是我們國家未來的主人翁

    Smoking has been failing the health of the people in our country,there has including the future master of our country.

    Smoking does so much harm among us, including those youngsters of promising.

    我們再也不能忽視這個問題了

    We can not neglect this problem any more.

    We are facing a serious problem now.

    我們應該支持反抽煙運動

    We should support the anti-smoking campaign.

    老師和家長若有抽煙應該設法戒煙,或者至少不要在孩子面前抽煙

    If teacher and parents have been smoking ought to get rid of it, or at least do not smoking in the presence of the children.

    Grownups who smoke are supposed to quit right now. Do not smoke by the childrent.

    因為大人抽煙會給小孩不好的示範

    Because the smoking adult that gives a bad example for children.

    Smoking gives childrent a bad example.

    另外,政府必須透過電視廣告和報章雜誌讓民眾知道抽煙的害處

    Otherwise,the government must announce the bad of smoke that through by TV commercial and newspaper.

    Gonernment should let us know smoking does much harm, through newspaper, magzine and television.

    Source(s): 抽香菸記大過
  • 1 decade ago

    In everyone's opinion, smoking a cigarette is bad for health.

    However many of us are still smoke,

    including some teenagers who are under age.

    The reason for smoking ban is that smoking damages public's health,

    therefore people have responsibility for protecting our children.

    Thus the prolems with smoking should not be ingnored.

    Smoking ban should be supported by every public.

    In particulr, teachers and parents who are smokers should quit this habit. Moreover, they should avoid smoking with children because this shows a bad sample.

    Apart from this, the govenment should enhance smoking ban through

    mass media. Hence people are able to understand the drawback of

    smoking.

    2008-01-04 00:49:14 補充:

    第二句However many of us are still smoke改成 however many of us are still smoking.

    Source(s): 自己
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