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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

10點~訂正英文作文文法(打工經驗)

去年暑假我在一家超市打工

I did a part time job in a supermarket at last summer.

平日每天工作三小時,星期六全天

Ihe weekdays worked three hours and whole Saturday ,

我的工錢是每小時70元

my wage 70dollars per hours.

我擔任採購人員的助理

I was served as the purchaser’s assistant

我很喜歡這個工作,因為我可以認識更多商品,並且可以和一些公司接洽

.I liked this job,because I cam learned about much merchandise and contact with some company.

透過打工,學生不但可以賺取零用錢,還可以獲得獨立感與責任心

By the way of part time job,the students not only get poket money but also to earn the feeling of independence.

但是不管如何,學生打工不可影響課業

But anyway,students do part time job should not affect school work,

而且,學生絕不准到夜總會或酒廊等場所工作

furthetmore,students never allowed do part time job in night clubs or saloon bar.

我的疑問?後三句是應該用現在簡單式嗎?因為不是在敘述過去的事。

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  • 1 decade ago
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    去年暑假我在一家超市打工

    I did a part time job in a supermarket at last summer.

    * I had a part-time jpb at a supermarket last summer.

    => I had a part-time job at a supermarket last summer.

    平日每天工作三小時,星期六全天

    Ihe weekdays worked three hours and whole Saturday ,

    * I have to work three hours during the weekdays and whole Saturday.

    =>I worked three hours a day on the weekdays and whole day on Saturdays.

    我的工錢是每小時70元

    my wage 70dollars per hours.

    *My wage was 70 dollars per hour.

    =>(same as above)

    我擔任採購人員的助理

    I was served as the purchaser’s assistant

    *In the supermarket, I was an assistant of the purchaser.

    =>I was an assistant of an purchasing agent.

    我很喜歡這個工作,因為我可以認識更多商品,並且可以和一些公司接洽

    .I liked this job,because I cam learned about much merchandise and contact with some company.

    *I love this job very much because I could be famaliar with many goods

    from the supermarket. And, I could approach some companies.

    =>I liked this job because I could learn more merchandise and was able to approach some companies.

    透過打工,學生不但可以賺取零用錢,還可以獲得獨立感與責任心

    By the way of part time job,the students not only get poket money but also to earn the feeling of independence.

    * Through the PT(part-time) job, the students not only can get some

    spending money, but also enhance the indenpence and responsibility.

    => Through the PT job, the students can not only earn some pocket money but also acquire the indenpence and responsibility.

    但是不管如何,學生打工不可影響課業

    But anyway,students do part time job should not affect school work,

    * However, no matter what, students shouldn't be affeced the school work by the part-time job.

    => However, the school work shouldn't be affected by the part-time job.

    而且,學生絕不准到夜總會或酒廊等場所工作

    furthetmore,students never allowed do part time job in night clubs or saloon bar.

    * Also, they never allowed to work at night clubs or bars

    => Also, it should never be allowed that students work at night clubs or bars...etc.

    Source(s): MYSELF
  • 1 decade ago

    你的文法都有一些小錯誤喔~幫你訂正如下~

    去年暑假我在一家超市打工

    I did a part time job in a supermarket at last summer.

    * I had a part-time jpb at a supermarket last summer.

    平日每天工作三小時,星期六全天

    Ihe weekdays worked three hours and whole Saturday ,

    * I have to work three hours during the weekdays and whole Saturday.

    我的工錢是每小時70元

    my wage 70dollars per hours.

    *My wage was 70 dollars per hour.

    我擔任採購人員的助理

    I was served as the purchaser’s assistant

    *In the supermarket, I was an assistant of the purchaser.

    我很喜歡這個工作,因為我可以認識更多商品,並且可以和一些公司接洽

    .I liked this job,because I cam learned about much merchandise and contact with some company.

    *I love this job very much because I could be famaliar with many goods

    from the supermarket. And, I could approach some companies.

    透過打工,學生不但可以賺取零用錢,還可以獲得獨立感與責任心

    By the way of part time job,the students not only get poket money but also to earn the feeling of independence.

    * Through the PT(part-time) job, the students not only can get some

    spending money, but also enhance the indenpence and responsibility.

    但是不管如何,學生打工不可影響課業

    But anyway,students do part time job should not affect school work,

    * However, no matter what, students shouldn't be affeced the school work by the part-time job.

    而且,學生絕不准到夜總會或酒廊等場所工作

    furthetmore,students never allowed do part time job in night clubs or saloon bar.

    * Also, they never allowed to work at night clubs or bars

    Source(s): 自己
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