My Dream Home 請英文高手幫幫忙!!

Question

老師要我們上台報告自己夢想中的家

請英文高手幫我訂正!!!

感激不盡!!

My dream home is located in suburb,close to downtown. My dream house is a Japanese style house,in the living room has a sliding glass door to be allowed to appreciate the outside garden and the fish pond.I want my room is big with a big bathtub bathroom so I can make spa every day.And I hoped has mutually looks after good neighbors.

Update:

小溪

因為老師說內容要包括inside outside neighbor

所以我後面才又加這個

And I hope to have good neighbors and we can take care of each

other.

我希望有可以互相照顧的好鄰居

不知道文法對不對!!

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1.My dream home is located in the suburb.

suburb前面要加 the; suburb一定是close to downtown,所以後面那句可以省略.

2. It is a Japanese style house.

It代替my dream home, 避免重複.

3. The living room has a sliding glass door which allows people to view

the garden and the fish pond outside.

appreciate是賞識不是欣賞,可改用view...

4. I want to have a large room and a bathroom with a big bathtub inside

so I can make spa everyday.

我把它改得比較順一點...因為太多big,你也可改以large代替.

5. And I hope to have good neighbors and we can take care of each

other.

這句不曉得這是你要的意思.........

供你參考囉~

2007-12-24 17:18:52 補充：

最後一句不曉得是不是你要的意思...

2007-12-25 20:09:59 補充：

文法上是對的.....

或者你也可以敘述得更詳細:

And I hope I can get along well with my neighbors so we can take care of each other.

get along will with...和睦相處

2007-12-25 20:10:34 補充：

sorry...是get along well with...

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