ummm i need help?
getting review for this story my sister and i are writing please check it out http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3619803/1/The_Children...
thank you and i will talk to my sis about making them older
- nikki :PLv 41 decade agoFavorite Answer
Maybe you should make them a bit older.
To me, it seems if they're 14 they seem a bit too young.
In my opinion.
Good luck with it.