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Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 1 decade ago

ummm i need help?

getting review for this story my sister and i are writing please check it out http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3619803/1/The_Children...

Update:

thank you and i will talk to my sis about making them older

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Maybe you should make them a bit older.

    Around 16-17.

    To me, it seems if they're 14 they seem a bit too young.

    In my opinion.

    Good luck with it.

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