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請幫我修改此篇英文作文~Teenage Suicide(2)

Another significant cause is the bad relationship between teenagers and their family. Because of the heavy slump in economy nowadays, it’s hard to raise children. Parents usually both have jobs and are very busy with their work so that the communication between them and their children becomes poor. Teenagers are in a sensitive and sentimental phase of life, they have so many cares and difficulties on their minds that needed to be talked about. If their parents always neglect them and scold them, they may think not to be cared about. At once teenagers are estranged from their parents, they may commit suicide when they can’t find the channel to unleash all their cares.

Finally, the other cause is relationship problems. Teenagers often curious about the opposite sex and hope for the further relationship between them. However, people in their teen phase don’t develop mature and sanely mind yet. Once they have deeper relationship, they usually want to possess everything of their girlfriends or boyfriends. They not only hope for the whole attention, but also control each other’s lives. They can’t endure the other sides’ fooling around or having another sweetheart. In this circumstance, the love-crossed ones often sink into heartbreak and extreme depression. It’s easy for them to commit suicide.

Now that we know the main causes of why teenagers commit suicide, we can take measures to prevent from them doing this.

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    Another significant cause is the bad relationship between teenagers and their family. Because of the heavy slump in economy nowadays, it is hard to raise children. Both parents must work in order to provide the basic needs for their family, and thus are extremely busy and often neglect the importance of communication with their children. Teenagers are in a sensitive and sentimental phase of life, and so they have many thoughts and difficulties on their minds that need to be talked about. If their parents are always neglecting them and scolding at them, they may think that their parents do not care about them. At once teenagers are estranged from their parents; they may commit suicides when they cannot find the channel to unleash all their troubles in their minds.

    Finally, the other cause is relationship problems. Teenagers are often curious about the opposite sex and hope to further the relationships. However, young people in their teen phase have not yet developed a mature and sanely mind yet. Once they are in a deeper relationship, they usually want to possess everything of their girlfriends or boyfriends. They not only hope for the whole attention, but also to control each other’s life. They cannot endure to see the other perosn fooling around or having another sweetheart. Under this circumstance, the love-crossed ones often sink into heartbreak and extreme depression and therefore it is easy for them to commit suicides.

    Now that we know the main causes of why teenagers commit suicides we can take measures to prevent them from doing it.

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  • 1 decade ago

    另一重大起因是少年和他們的家庭之間的壞關係。 由於重的暴跌在現今經濟,培養孩子是堅硬的。 父母通常兩個有工作并且是非常繁忙的與他們的工作,以便他們和他們的孩子之間的通信變得窮。 少年到在一個敏感和感傷的階段生活之內,他們在需要被談論的他們的頭腦有許多關心和困難。 如果他們的父母總忽略他們并且責罵他們,他們也許認為不關心。 當他們不可能發現渠道解開所有他們的關心時,少年從他們的父母立即被疏遠,他們也許自殺。 終於,另一起因是關係問題。 少年經常好奇對對進一步關係的異性和希望他們之間。 然而,人們在他們青少年的階段不開發成熟和不神志正常介意。 一旦他們有更加深刻的關係,他們通常想要擁有一切他們的女朋友或男朋友。 他們不僅盼望整體注意,而且控制彼此的生活。 他們不可能忍受其他邊』無所事事或有另一個甜心。 在這情況,愛橫渡的部分經常下沉入傷心欲绝和極端消沉。 他們自殺是容易的

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