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As the golden sun slowly descended from heaven’s throne, the blissful air silently coveted the restless men. A buffalo of immense stature would easily satisfy the hunger of the awaited men. Before the beast even realized the impact, the men had launched a cleverly crafted tool into the animal’s beating heart,... show more As the golden sun slowly descended from heaven’s throne, the blissful air silently coveted the restless men. A buffalo of immense stature would easily satisfy the hunger of the awaited men. Before the beast even realized the impact, the men had launched a cleverly crafted tool into the animal’s beating heart, leaving it to a mercifulness death. Yet as the men feasted on their golden prize that night, little did they know that the same stone knife that had slain the beast would cripple humanity as it carved history’s long awaited path of technological advancement. Evolution has caused man to evolve their process of thinking, leading them to many advances in technology. These include our modern day phone, computer, and cars. However, as technology aids the evolving man, it can also harm humans and their environment.
Update: On the morning of December 7, 1941, two aerial attack waves, totaling 361 aircraft with the intention of reducing or eliminating the United States' military power in the Pacific, bombed Pearl Harbor. The attack on Hawaii invited America into World War II and contributed to more than 60 million deaths, including... show more On the morning of December 7, 1941, two aerial attack waves, totaling 361 aircraft with the intention of reducing or eliminating the United States' military power in the Pacific, bombed Pearl Harbor. The attack on Hawaii invited America into World War II and contributed to more than 60 million deaths, including 40 million civilizans and 20 million soldiers. The ability to create these inventions, wether it might be a simple stone tool, or a complex nuclear bomb, has been prolonged through history as progression throughtout the world . Many people naturally assume that technology and the inventions of tools would aid humans into future advancements, however, as evident in Brave New World, today’s current state, and history’s lesson, technology has become a burden on man.
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