Polly asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請強者幫我檢查我的文法有沒有錯誤

我要寫一封英文信給我的朋友

但是我實在是英文很爛

想請強者可以幫我檢查我的信有哪裡文法錯誤或者是不順暢的地方

謝謝

信的內容(我沒有分大小寫):

dear sue

how are you? it is a long time to see you. i miss you, your husband, and your lovely home so much. i am sorry that i had told you i will give the picture for you. but i am to lazy to develop the pictures, it took a lot of time to develop the pictures. i am so sorry. the buildings on the card are the famous buildings in Taiwan. i hope someday you can come to Taiwan, and i will take you to visit all the buildings.

merry christmas and happy new year.

love Jenny

就請大家幫幫我吧

謝謝

3 Answers

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  • Lv 4
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Dear Sue,

    How are you? I haven't seen you for a long time. I miss your husband, you, and your lovely home so much. I was sorry that I told you I would give the pictures to you. I was too lazy to develop the pictures. It took me a lot of time. I feel so sorry for it. The buildings in the card are famous in Taiwan. I hope you can come to Taiwan someday.I will take you to visit all the famous buildings in Taiwan.

    May

    Merry Christmas (=Merry Xmas) and Happy New Year

    Love,

    Jenny

    有些句子有贅字有刪掉了

    有些是位置上我有作一些調動^^

    Source(s): myself
  • 1 decade ago

    Dear Sue,

    How have you been? It’s been a while that we haven’t seen each other. I miss you, your husband and your lovely home so much. I’m sorry that I didn’t send the pictures to you as I said. I was too lazy to develop the films. Hence, it took me a long time to develop them. Again, I’m apologized for the delay.

    The buildings in the card are the famous buildings in Taiwan. Hopefully, you will visit Taiwan in a near future and I’ll surely take you around to see those famous buildings.

    Wish you all well!

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

    Love,

    Jenny

    希望可以派的上用場喔~

    Source(s): 自己
  • Ahoo
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Dear Sue

    How's you recently? Long time no see, i miss you so much.

    Please remember me of your husband and your lovable kids.

    Sorry, i fogot to give you the picture. You know, i am so forgetful.

    Gosh, i haven't had the pucture developed yet.

    The other sude of this card shows a well known building, Taipei 101!

    And, i am waiting for you to come visit Taiwan.

    MERRY CHRISMAS & HAPPY NEW YEAR

    Jenny , Truly

    Source(s): 偶數白出
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