~匿名~ asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文稿 My friend

誰可以幫我加長英文稿?文法一定要對喔~

I have a good friend. Although we have different backgrounds, our favorite hobby is the same. Two years ago, we met in our classroom. We both joined a painting competition. I was looking at her picture when she was drawing. I knew, she worked very hard. After that, she got the first place and I got the second. Since then, we have become good friends.

I like my friend, and so does she. She is smart and she’s full of knowledge. She is just like a treasure mountain. Whenever we are together, I can always learn from her.

I know, you want to ask me” How can you meet such a good friend?” Because I always trying to understand my friend with my heart. Remember, tart words make to friends: a spoonful of honey will catch more flies than gallon of vinegar. Although friendship can not with ceremony, but can’t civility, either.

我大概要念三分鐘左右......

Update:

對不起,我後面那句打錯了!應該是:Although friendship can not with ceremony, but can’t without civility, either.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    I have a very good friend.

    我建議 加個 very 來作強調,因為你是在講你的"這"一位好友.

    Even though we have different backgrounds, the hobby we like most is the same.

    (我覺得用 even though 比較好.)

    Two years ago, we met in class. We both joined the same painting comepitition. I remember one time, I was looking at her picture when she was drawing. At that very moment, I knew straight away that she is a very hard-working person. As I have just mentioned just now, yes indeed, she came first in the competition while I came second. Since then, we became good friends.

    I am fond to have such a good friend. We both get along with each other very well. I like my friend, and so does she. She is very smart and her brain is filled with all kinds of knowledge. She is just like a treasure mountain. Whenever we are together, I am the student, who always learns new things from her.

    I know that you may want to ask me this kind of question" How could you meet such a good friend?" I mean that this is nearly impossible to happen such a thing in the real world. Yes, I am sure the lucky person. The reason why we are good friends is because I always treat and learn to understand her by heart.

    There's a quote said by Benjamin Franklin which I think is very well said." Tart words make no friends; a spoonful or honey will catch more flies than a gallon of vinegar."

    Even though friendship isn't a ceremony, but neither can't civility.

    (你後面那句我不知你想講什麼耶)我只能憑感覺.

    如果這是演講,我建議你找英文很好的人,告訴你什麼時候停頓,什麼英文字該強調來表達更完整.

    我給你我的msn和及時通:

    msn: tinakao2001@hotmail.com

    即時通: tinakao2001@yahoo.com.tw

    如果遇到我我很願意告訴你如何講比較好

    Source(s): 我自己
  • 1 decade ago

    Learn better english conversation, please go Royal english club http://www.royalclub.idv.tw/ , great and free

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