Alva asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

麻煩英文高手...幫我檢查文法或是做些修改!!急!!!

The changes cause the atypical employment becomes a new trend and the rate of atypical employment has increased to such a level.

However, the atypical workers are lake of protection and will brings working poverty of social problems.

After strengthened the gap between the rich and the poor, it will cause an unstable society and many other social problems.

For this reason, a proper policy to protect these workers is necessary and should be immediately.

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    The changes causing*atypical employment has become* a new trend and the rate of atypical employment has increased to a new* level.

    However, those atypical workers lack* protection and will bring about*some social problems of working poverty .

    After strengthening*(enlarging) the gap between the rich and the poor, it will cause an unstable society and many other social problems.

    For this reason alone, a proper policy to protect these workers is necessary and should be implemented* immediately.

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