? asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

CHECK THE GRAMMER MISTAKE

When the banker returned home, he saw his house was unlocked and all the things were disappointed! He was very angry because he robbed by BJ and Billy. He called the police for the help.

When the police arrived, he saw a lot oil on the road .

‘Why? There is a lot of oil on the road,’ the police asked.

‘I think the oil was dripped on by those 2 men‘s car. If we follow it, I think we can find them,’ the banker replied.

So, they got on the police car and followed Billy and BJ.

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  • 1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    其他人別抄我唷!

    disappointed -> disappeared

    he robbed -> he was robbed

    Why? There is a lot of oil on the road -> Why there is plenty of oil on the road?

    dripped on -> dripped

    those 2 men's car -> their car

    got on -> got in

    Source(s): English Grammer
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    When the banker returned home, he NOTICED his house was unlocked and all OF HIS BELONGS HAD DISAPPEARED! He was very UPSET AND REALIZED he MUST HAVE BEEN robbed by BJ and Billy SINCE THEY WERE THE ONLY RECENT VISITORS. He IMMEDIATELY called the police for the help.

    When the police arrived, he saw a lot oil on the road.

    'Why IS there oil on the road?' The police asked.

    'I think IT CAME FROM THE TWO ROBBERS' car. If we TRACE it, WE MIGHT BE ABLE TO find them.' The banker replied.

    So, they got on the police car and followed THE OIL MARKS IN HOPES OF TRACKING DOWN Billy and BJ.

    Source(s): eva
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