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ife Behind These Eyes Sometimes I wish someone will find me Beyond these eyes A long time ago I wished for happiness I guess life is full of hurt when happiness doesn't work Never thought I ever felt this way I try to smile but it shows You look at me thinking everything is alright but deep inside I... show more ife Behind These Eyes

Sometimes I wish someone will find me
Beyond these eyes
A long time ago I wished for happiness
I guess life is full of hurt when happiness doesn't work
Never thought I ever felt this way
I try to smile but it shows
You look at me thinking everything is alright but deep inside
I wanna die
Sometimes I wish someone will find me
a tear drop making my eyes burn
Just wishing I can see the truth
behind these eyes
My mind cant forget and heart still burns
I am so cold and alone
Forgive me for I have sin
Sometimes I wish I can find love
Never will happened
Beyond these eyes

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