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? asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

送20點~請英文高手幫忙(中翻英)文法問題

我的英文不好搞不清楚文法該怎麼擺單字

想寫:

目前沒有一月份需求確切的訊息

會持續追蹤

我用了線上翻譯

Information so with precise demand as January at present

Will track continuously

我想個文法應該不對

希望高手可以幫我修改

或是有更好的句子可以表達

為了感謝

贈送20點

Update:

Customer said "may be they will need 4 sets machines in Q1 2008".

Upon information is for sir reference,

I will keep to track with customer in order to get right information.

Update 2:

這是我回給長官的內容

意思是:

客戶說:08年的第一季可能會有四台設備的需求

以上訊息提供長官參考

我將持續追蹤客戶以得到正確消息

Update 3:

長官問:

Is there possibility of January request?

一月有可能有需求嗎?

Update 4:

所以我想回覆他:

目前沒有一月份需求得確切訊息

會持續追蹤

Update 5:

(這句是不是能套用I will keep to track with customer in order to get right information.)

Update 6:

因為對方是長官,所以用詞上要有尊敬.

因為他問的問題我不能明確回答:有或沒有

所以想回答模倪兩可的答覆

感謝有回覆的網友

是否能不要加"我們"

謝謝

5 Answers

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  • ?
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    We do not have the precise information about the requirements for January at the moment, but, will continue to keep track of it.

    我們目前沒有一月份需求的確切訊息, 但, 會持續追蹤.

    _________________________________________________________

    ~~您如果還有更多訊息或前後文可提供的話會寫得更符合您的需求~~

    2007-11-28 10:03:01 補充:

    不加主詞"我們"的話語意不清, 或者您可以以 "I" 替代 "we"(順便小改如下):

    "We(or: I) do not have the precise information at the moment about the request for January, but, will continue to keep track of it."

    2007-11-28 10:03:33 補充:

    或者說:

    "The customers haven't given us(or: me) their precise request for January. We(or: I) will continue to keep track of it."

    在此說明: "keep track of it" 就代表追踨這件事.

    2007-11-28 10:04:24 補充:

    ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    如果要說到您提的那句, 那就小改如下:

    I will check with the customer(s) until I get the right information.

    這樣, 也可以表達您會持續追踨的意思.

    2007-11-28 10:10:26 補充:

    _____________________________________

    相信您之前的回信長官一定看得懂, 只是尊敬長官可以在信首用dear sir即可, 不需要用"for sir reference", 用 "for your reference" 就好了.

    以上補充的答案夠用嗎? 若有問題請再提. thanks.

  • 1 decade ago

    看樣子是公司對公司,

    我之前寫文章的時候,假如不方便用we的話,我建議可以使用公司的名字,或是單位的名字來代替we

    用amber的回答,we 是指XXX,那句可以寫成

    XXX does not have the precise information at the moment about the request for January, but, will continue to keep track of it.

  • 1 decade ago

    目前沒有一月份需求確切的訊息

    會持續追蹤

    At the moment/At present, the exact data of January's demand is not available.

    Will keep you updated.

    2007-11-28 10:01:34 補充:

    Sir,

    At the moment, the exact number of machines needed in the first quarter of 2008 is not confirmed yet. According to the customer, there might be a need of four sets of xxx (品名或型號). Will get the firm answer later on and keep you updated.

    2007-11-28 10:01:56 補充:

    這是根據你所形容的狀況寫成的 並沒有完全依您的中文句意直接翻譯 這是本人想像在這種情況下 會說的話 翻譯如下:

    目前2008第一季客戶所需機台的確切數量還未定 根據客戶透露的消息 可能有四台 實際數量容後向您報告

    2007-11-28 10:12:07 補充:

    稱謂:

    通常 Sir / Dear Sir 是用在不熟的人 如果是你的長官 直接叫 Dear Mr. xx 或 Dear xx (first name) 即可

    2007-11-28 10:19:40 補充:

    商業書信如果可以不用 I or We 就別用

    2007-11-28 10:26:54 補充:

    除非你表達的是你個人的想法或意見

    2007-11-28 15:47:25 補充:

    最後一句可以說:

    Will keep you posted on the status once available.

  • 1 decade ago

    We don't have the precise infomation about the requirement of January.

    We will follow up.

    Source(s): 朋友幫忙
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  • 1 decade ago

    So far there is no precisely required message for January, and it will be traced continuously.

    嗯...僅供參考

    應該還有更好的

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