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Do you like my poem, its about my dead dog... sniff.?

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For you,

my watchguard, my friend.

though you are gone,

you will be remembered till the end.

So it's cutains to you,

a personality like a buffoon, and strength like a snowplow.

now I saw my final words,

while you take your final bow.

So it's curtains to you,

you are my breath of fresh air, and the loyal and the dependable.

so just go away, I'm done,

though you are still with me, like a cookie, you crumble.

Still, it's curtains to you,

"good girl," you've caught the frisbee.

always watching us in my room.

parting the deceased, it's not so easy.

With your tremendous tickling, and tasting tongue,

snooping around like a pirate searching for treasure.

Yes, it's curtains to you,

always beside me forever.

No, you can't leave,

not with your boogying booty and beautiful ears.

Don't let the curtains close,

not even through all these years.

cant finish cause i don't have enough space.

Update:

Some words to you,

I'll remember you, only if you do now and then.

I realize finally it's curtains to you,

my emotions continue to deepen.

Now, my buddy,

realize this world was your curtain

you can now exceed the old,

on the threshold of anew.

the curtains close quickly, you must go,

my dog, you were great, and I'm very proud of you.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    8 1/2 Please finish so I can rate it higher!

  • 1 decade ago

    that is such a beautiful poem. i lost my dog two months ago and this reminded me of her so much... i want my pookie dog... :O( i give you an 11 and i am so sorry you lost her. keep writing, your really good

  • 1 decade ago

    I like it. sorry about ur dog.

    Oh I give u a 10

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    yes...but your dog isn't proud of you so he chose to die instead. sorry...i can't explain why...i fugin hate your poem...

    but it's really good tho.

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