spelling,grammar,mistakes check please?

well its something i've wrote for my about me for myspace and i need help with grammars, and mistakes please help i'm bad at these.(and dont mind my bio :) }

Hi. I am a light sleeper, I sometimes sleep with the lights on. I am easily scared so for whatever reason I am over your house sleeping and wake you up in the middle of the night, it's not my fault. I enjoy drinking apple juice and eating chips and eating mommie cookings, like ALOT. I love to draw and color, it's not something I do very often but its fun..I play games too.I Love Harvestmoon and chobo's dugeon its awesome..I also love my family&friends they make me happy...

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    This is the correct way as far as I can tell. I would need coffee to make a though correction.

    Your paragraph Edited:

    Hi, I am a light sleeper. I sometimes sleep with the lights on. I am easily scared, so if for ever reason, I am over your house sleeping and wake you up in the middle of the night, it's not my fault. I enjoy drinking apple juice and eating chips and eating mommie's cooking, I like it a lot. I love to draw and color. It's not something I do very often but its fun. I play games too. I Love Harvest Moon and Chobo's Dugeon, they are awesome. I also love my family and friends, they make me happy.

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