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Computerized society 「這是我自己下的title」 In human’s life, the computer has already a part of necessary living at present. We couldn’t keep off it.It changes our learning, work and social economic mode. It isn't only a very useful tool, but also is very capable and high-efficiency servant. Although it... show more Computerized society 「這是我自己下的title」
In human’s life, the computer has already a part of necessary living at present. We couldn’t keep off it.It changes our learning, work and social economic mode. It isn't only a very useful tool, but also is very capable and high-efficiency servant. Although it can't be like a person who has the thinking of creations, it can do anything by your order. It always follows the host's order and looks for a result repeatedly. Along with the development of Internet, it is the big hero that gets up the computers connection of the world. People of the world can be more convenient to communicate each other at the internet. No matter where do you live, it just connect to get to the internet. And then you can communicate with the computers of the world. People's communicated interaction is not limit, the mode of life and work also has a change from the computers. The times of the computers change people's relationship. It corroborates “to turn complicated is simple of idea” and becomes a target of living.


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