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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

急....幫忙一下翻一篇正式的商業書信...老闆急要...

請各位大大,幫幫我, 老闆急要...內容意思如下....可以幫我寫成英文的商業書信嗎...要如何流暢一點呢? 而不是中式英文....

我們已付清10月份房租, 希望你能按照上次與我們經理談的條件, 幫我們安排宣傳攤位, 有了你的支持, 我們有了宣傳攤位, 銷售業績提高, 資金才會充足, 才能按時付清房租. 並且, 一個月2萬的租金, 對於一間新開的床品品牌來說壓力過大, 我們現在每個月都虧損1萬元左右, 每個月需要銷售5.5萬才能達到平衡. 如果沒有你們的宣傳攤位, 我們的銷售就得不到改善, 業績也無法提高, 估計將會虧損10萬元/年, 我們不可能運轉一間不賺錢的店面.

自從上次貴部門的安排, 在廣場中央安排攤位, 銷售有明顯改善, 但是還是無法達到水平. 希望能得到你的支持, 讓大家一起合作, 努力創造好的業績.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    We have paid off the October rent. Per your discussion with our manager

    last time, please set up a promotional stall as agreed. With your support on the

    stall, we anticipate the sales would increase to bring in more operating cash

    so we can pay the future rent on time. The current monthly rent of $ 20K

    is a big burden for a new bedding retailer like us. We need at least $ 55K

    monthly revenue for cash flow breakeven. Without this promotional stall,

    we can't possibly boost the sales. Currently we estimated our annual loss

    would be around $ 100K. No one can afford to run a money-losing store like this.

    Sales was up significantly last time when you helped to set up the stall at

    the center of the Plaza. However, it wasn't satisfactory. We'd greatly

    appreciate your continuous support and cooperation to improve our sales record.

    Source(s): 我也常被抓此等公差、唉....
  • Zippi
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    我們已付清10月份房租, 希望你能按照上次與我們經理談的條件, 幫我們安排宣傳攤位, 有了你的支持, 我們有了宣傳攤位, 銷售業績提高, 資金才會充足, 才能按時付清房租. 並且, 一個月2萬的租金, 對於一間新開的床品品牌來說壓力過大, 我們現在每個月都虧損1萬元左右, 每個月需要銷售5.5萬才能達到平衡. 如果沒有你們的宣傳攤位, 我們的銷售就得不到改善, 業績也無法提高, 估計將會虧損10萬元/年, 我們不可能運轉一間不賺錢的店面.

    We have paid up the October house rent and hoped you can follow the term discussed previously with our manager by arranging for us a promotion stall, which will hike sales result, get sufficient fund, and pay the rent on time. The monthly NT$20,000 rent is far too much for a new brand of bedding products. We lose about NT$ 10,000 a month, and need NT$55,000 sales to get even. Without the stall, we can’t improve our sales performance, which we estimate will cause us to lose NT$ 100,000 a year. We can hardly afford to run a losing shop.

    自從上次貴部門的安排, 在廣場中央安排攤位, 銷售有明顯改善, 但是還是無法達到水平. 希望能得到你的支持, 讓大家一起合作, 努力創造好的業績.

    Your last arrangement by setting up a stall in the center of the plaza made obvious sales improvement but still fail us in achieving the expected level. We hope to get your support and cooperation to strive for creating a good sales achievement.

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