{英文}報告翻譯

痾...由於此人英文不是很好,,所以打了一篇文章再用WORD翻譯,,不過朋友說翻出來詞句 會很怪異,,因此,,想請英文高手鑑定一下此篇文章,,然後,,可以的話,,請告知哪邊的句型可以改成怎樣更好,,也讓我從錯誤中學習=口=....非常的謝謝回答我的人!! 文章↓↓↓↓ 由此開始 Today, I want recommend Tachibana Keita(橘 慶太), that is among them first League members of W-inds, reason of engaged in this professioning: Tachibana... show more 痾...由於此人英文不是很好,,所以打了一篇文章再用WORD翻譯,,不過朋友說翻... 會很怪異,,因此,,想請英文高手鑑定一下此篇文章,,然後,,可以的話,,請告知哪...

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Today, I want recommend Tachibana Keita(橘 慶太), that is among them first League members of W-inds, reason of engaged in this professioning: Tachibana Keita(橘 慶太) that Fukuoka(福岡縣) come from is it sing match with magnetic and emotion voice evaluate unanimous favorable comment participate in the contest and select in more than 12000 to participate in on Japan Show one's talent in the hand.
Individual quite likes Tachibana Keita(橘 慶太), especially the sound part, it is that " 道標" to like song of his most, because of this one too, just know his existence, and then go to understand him, so has collected the following many materials about him.
Born on day: December 16, 1958 Birthplace: Fukuoka county
Constellation: Sagittarius Height: 179 c m
Advantage: Optimistic, not artificial Shortcoming: It is easy to be angry
Interest: It is electronic and forging the chain muscle, playing the musical instrument, playing soccer to hit Music liked: Soul, House, Techo
Animal that likes: Dog <because lovely is it act like a child to loving very >
Method to remove pressure: Cry! Remembrance as a child: Like crying for the spirit
Update: 痾=口= 我不要翻譯,,我只要大家告訴句型是否需要修改的較順,,非常謝謝
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