na asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

20分-這句英文有甚麼問題?Enclosed herewith the above styles nos

Enclosed herewith the above styles nos rose pins for salesman sample used.

這句英文有沒有問題? 有的話請一一指出..

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  • xan
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
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    如果沒有誤會你的意思, 我會這樣寫:

    1. Salesman sample of rose pins with style numbers mentioned above is enclosed herewith.

    隨信附寄上述型號的玫瑰飾針的銷售員樣本.

    2. Enclosed are rose pins with style numbers mentioned above for salesman sample.

    附奉上述型號的玫瑰飾針以作銷售員樣本之用.

    其實用 [for the use of saleman sample] 也正確, 但有點累贅. 我覺得用 [for salesman sample] 已可表明意思了.

  • 1 decade ago

    Sample rose pins in the style mentioned above are enclosed.

  • Icarus
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    問題如下:

    全句句子欠動詞

    the above styles是不適當,above 不可作形容詞

    什麼是nos?

    for saleman sample used也錯了

    全句可改為:

    Enclosed are the nos rose pins mentioned above for the purposes of salesmen's samples.

    2007-10-30 12:00:21 補充:

    我是指用above style在這裡連同rose pins一起用不太恰當,above當然可作形容詞用。

    2007-10-30 16:42:07 補充:

    如果nos解numbers (不過冇人咁用,至少係有個full stop: Nos.),全句可寫成:Enclosed are the rose pins mentioned above for the purposes of salesmen's samples.orThe rose pins mentioned above are enclosed for the purposes of salesmen's samples.

    2007-11-01 11:49:39 補充:

    咁樣揀答案都得?

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