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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我改一篇英文的文章!!

The protestant Reformation of Western Europe, began in the sixteenth century, concluded the religions of catholic and protestant. During the beginning of the reformation period, the Catholic churches performed the action of indulgences which Luther opposed on such action. Instead, Luther thought that the only way to absolve their mistakes was to believe in God. As Luther' idea been spread out, the new religion had developed in Western Europe and was known as the "Luther's." Even Luther's idea was suggested by Calvin, but yet Calvin disagreed with some of Luther's concepts such as predestination. After, another new religion, Calvin's, was formed. Therefore, the religions initially begin with Catholic and ended up with two other religions of Luther's and Calvin's. And now, all three religions are spread out all over Western Europe.

請幫我修改以上這篇文章!! 謝謝!!

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Spherical Harmonics : Calvin 只是一個新的觀念, and 這是一篇歷史的作文, 請問你覺得對於這樣的文章要怎麼改才會比較好呢???

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    基本上看起來沒什麼問題, 修改的都是一些小東西, 如果跟你真正的意思不同, 就不要用了..

    (The protestant Reformation of Western Europe began in the sixteenth century resulting the religions of catholic and protestant. )

    (At) the beginning of the reformation period, the Catholic churches performed the action of indulgences which Luther opposed on such action.

    Instead, Luther thought that the only way to absolve their mistakes was to believe in God.

    As Luther' idea (was being) spread out, the new religion had developed in Western Europe and was known as the "Luther's."

    -如果是 Luther's 正在傳播時被稱為 Luther's, 才可用 As ... being.

    Even Luther's idea was suggested by Calvin, but yet Calvin disagreed with some of Luther's concepts such as predestination.

    (Afterward), another new religion(idea?), Calvin's, was formed.

    -Luther's 跟 Calvin's 是新宗教還是只是新觀念??

    Therefore, the religions initially begin with Catholic ended up with two other religions of Luther's and Calvin's. And now, all three religions are spread out (widely spread?) all over Western Europe.

    Source(s): 自己
  • Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    大大你好:

    新教的改革的西歐,第16個世紀開始,推斷宗教信仰的天主教的和新教的.期間開始的改革時期,天主教教堂履行行動的路德反對的在這樣的行動的放縱.代替,路德僅僅認為路到免除他們的錯誤會相信上帝.如同Luther'想法是散開,新宗教發展了在西歐和是被認為是"路德的". 甚至路德的想法被建議以加爾文,但是還加爾文不同意和一些的路德的思想例如預定.之後,另外的新宗教,加爾文的,被成形的.因此,宗教信仰最初開始天主教和結束拿起2其他的宗教信仰路德的和加爾文的.那麼,全部3個宗教信仰在散開遍及西歐

    Luther 路德 不過母音和拼音的地方有點怪怪的

    其實這樣也是ko的

    Source(s): 頭腦ˇ
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