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The protestant Reformation of Western Europe, began in the sixteenth century, concluded the religions of catholic and protestant. During the beginning of the reformation period, the Catholic churches performed the action of indulgences which Luther opposed on such action. Instead, Luther thought that the only way... show more The protestant Reformation of Western Europe, began in the sixteenth century, concluded the religions of catholic and protestant. During the beginning of the reformation period, the Catholic churches performed the action of indulgences which Luther opposed on such action. Instead, Luther thought that the only way to absolve their mistakes was to believe in God. As Luther' idea been spread out, the new religion had developed in Western Europe and was known as the "Luther's." Even Luther's idea was suggested by Calvin, but yet Calvin disagreed with some of Luther's concepts such as predestination. After, another new religion, Calvin's, was formed. Therefore, the religions initially begin with Catholic and ended up with two other religions of Luther's and Calvin's. And now, all three religions are spread out all over Western Europe.
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Update: Spherical Harmonics : Calvin 只是一個新的觀念, and 這是一篇歷史的作文, 請問你覺得對於這樣的文章要怎麼改才會比較好呢???
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