What do you think of this song I made?

The Girl at the Beach

There was a girl

Sitting on the sands

The waters rolling with the corals on the shore

Chin on her knees, a fetal image on the shore

Looking in the distance

Her curls of brown

Billow in the wind

Her face a frown

I couldn’t understand at all

I watch her from a distance

Then I remember, when I was young

Feeling miserable, I couldn’t calm

My mind, my soul,

I needed

The sea to love me again

Do do do do do

Do do do do do

Do do do do do

Do. Do. Do. Do.

Below is the link to the audio recording:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hOnCZUnDV5c

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    I think the girl described in the song was you...Anyway, it's nice, not bad. I totally got the message... maybe this girl is remembering her past and can't forget it even though she tried.

    Nice song.

    Source(s): ~ShAy~
  • 1 decade ago

    your voice was really pretty i especially like the last set of lyrics when you sing them

    its good :D

  • .
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    wow, it's sounds so angelic i absolutely love the lyrics

  • 1 decade ago

    its ok

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