asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請糾正我的英文. 謝謝!

以下是我讀文章所做的摘要,請各位高手幫我看看那裡有錯的地方.

Date: 12 October 2007

Source: Scott Bobb, Voice of America

http://www.voanews.com/english/2007-10-12-voa33.cf...

Summary:

To summarize the article, Nobel peace prize to climate activists highlights the seriousness of global warming and how it is relevant to every part of the world. Especially places like Africa, due to scarcity of water and low levels of wealth, the problem magnifies Africa in many ways. Therefore, it’s important to urges people to find a solution to the issue.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    原文大致上OK,若做點小修正可讓讀者更瞭解您的語意

    修飾如下:

    Summary:

    To summarize the article, the Nobel peace prize awarded to climate activists highlights the seriousness of global warming and its relevance to every corner of the world. Especially like places in Africa(或the place like Africa), due to scarcity of water and poverty, the problem would magnifies Africa’s plight in many ways. Therefore, it’s important to urges people to find solutions for the climate change issue.

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  • 1 decade ago

    To summarize this article, the Nobel Peace Prize encourages people to focus the current climate activists, to highlight the seriousness of global warming problems, and to aware how does it relevant to every part of the world.

    Especially, like those places in the Africa, it caues the shortage of water and low levels of wealth. Those issues are magnified in most of the places throughtout the Africa.

    Therefore, it’s important to get urges from people out of Africa and to find a solution for these issues.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    參考文獻跟日期通常都是放在最後

    不應該放在摘要前面 最好改一下比較好

    2007-10-26 01:56:54 補充:

    還有贅詞太多

    2007-10-26 02:05:39 補充:

    錯的地方很多 而且用詞不妥 介係詞也是

    要注意詞性阿

    最好加上一個摘要的標題

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