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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我翻譯英文(自我介紹)

一份差不多1分半多的自我介紹

是學校演講比賽用的

大家好

我的名字是XXX,

今天是我第一次在那麼多人面前用英文做自我介紹.

所以很緊張

如果說不好請見諒

我今年17歲,住在高雄鼓山

興趣是打電腦和打籃球和聽音樂

我非常不擅長交際,

所以有時人們會覺得我有點冷酷

但我會盡快改善。

我是獨生女同時也是單親家庭出生

我有個很愛我又盡責的媽媽

所以對於這樣的生活,我已感到很滿足和幸福

將來我希望能從事軍警方面的工作

或許考上的機率很小

但在畢業前,我會努力學習。

以上是我的自我介紹

謝謝你們的聆聽

PS.是我自己打的中文草稿

不知道可不可以

請有經驗的人可以給我一些建議

可以盡量翻了口語話一點

意思相同即可(但文法要對喔!)

或是還能加一些句子

你們都可以打出來

謝謝!!!

請盡快幫我翻譯 我後天要交給老師看看!!

感激不盡

Update:

我剛才發現我的點數不足= =

只能給五點....

Update 2:

謝謝!!

但請問一下是improv還是improve= =

我有在某個地方找到我那句翻譯:

我非常不擅長交際,

所以有時人們會覺得我有點冷酷

但我會盡快改善。

I am not very sociable.

Sometimes people say my personality is a little bit cold.

But I would like to improve it soon.

請問這樣也OK嗎?

只是我覺得他翻的這劇會比你翻的那句好唸!!

給我點意見吧!!

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Hello everybody,

    My name is xxx.

    Today, this is my first time to introduce myselfe in English in fornt of so

    many people, so I am very nervous.Please forgive me if I don't speak

    well.

    I am 17 years old and I live in 高雄鼓山, my interests are playing

    computer、basketball and listening to music. Because I am not very

    good at communication, people will feel I am a little cold sometimes.

    I will improv as soon as possible.

    I am the only daughter in my family and I am also born in the

    single-parent family. I have a mother who is so responsible and loves

    me so much.

    To such this life, I have already felt satisfied with the happiness very

    much.

    I hope I can be engaged in the work of army's police in the future.

    perhaps the probability to be admitted is very little, but I will study

    very hard before graduating.

    Finally, I hope I can get along with everyone very well.

    The above is my introduction. Thank you for your listening.

    這是我自己翻的,你參考一下吧~~我覺得你的自我介紹已經很多了!ok的~~拉~!最後幫你加上一句~呵~不好可以刪掉喔~!

    2007-10-19 14:40:23 補充:

    恩~對!是improve

    我覺得I am not very sociable.

    Sometimes people say my personality is a little bit cold.

    這個比較好。

    But I would like to improve it as soon as possible .這一句我覺得

    這樣會好一點。

    你在自己斟酌吧!

    Source(s): 我自己
  • 1 decade ago

    hi everyone

    my name is xxx

    today is my first time to introduce myself in front of so many people in english.

    therefore, i am a little be nervous.

    please forgive me if i dont speak well.

    i am seventeen years old.

    i live in 鼓山 of taiwan

    my hobbies are play basketball, listen music and surf internet.

    i am not real good at social.

    therefore , people feel i am a little bit cold sometimes.

    but i am trying to change this part of personality.

    i am an only daughter of single parent family.

    however my mother, who really loves me and takes all responsbilitys in

    this family.

    i am truly feel happy and satisfied in this kind of live.

    i hope i can be a solider or police office in the future.

    even though,it would be a little difficult to pass exam in both of them .

    but i will do my best to prepare it before graduation.

    it all about my introduce today.

    thank you for being so patient..

    路過 進來發表一下而已 雖然已經過了妳的deadline@@ 但還是希望在比賽之前有多點參考的價值

    Source(s): 自己
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