I really need peoples opinions on this peom thigy I wrote.?

People's opinions matter to me. Be truthful and honest please. I wrote this peom from a friends perspective. And I do not have a title for it either. I often think suicide, Might be a good thing. Considering it always crosses my mind. Is it selfish of me? To do that, to cause all of those cries? I... show more People's opinions matter to me. Be truthful and honest please.
I wrote this peom from a friends perspective. And I do not have a title for it either.

I often think suicide,
Might be a good thing.
Considering it always crosses my mind.
Is it selfish of me?
To do that, to cause all of those cries?
I think not, they brought it a pon themselves.
My choice nothing wrong with it they just don't see
Either way I'm happy and they'll get over it eventually.
So I'll carve your apologies into my wrist,
Let their guilt drip from my finger tips
Wrap this hate around my neck
Kick this chair right from beneath me.
Hang there lifelessly.

I'm not for sure but Idk here is a chorus for it I guess... Poem song I don't really care what it really is lol. Just something I wrote.

Chorus:
Suicidle in denial.
Suicidle can not smile.
Lonely and depressed.
Much on my shoulders.
So much stress.
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