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明天要交件了~但是還沒修~請各位英文達人幫忙修: Hello, ladies and gentlemen, today I’m going to talk about the movie I love the most. The story of the movie that I love the most is from a book. I saw the book many time before. When I heard the story will take into a film, I expected very much. The movie just as my... show more 明天要交件了~但是還沒修~請各位英文達人幫忙修:

Hello, ladies and gentlemen, today I’m going to talk about the movie I love the most.
The story of the movie that I love the most is from a book. I saw the book many time before. When I heard the story will take into a film, I expected very much. The movie just as my expectation. It Is lovely and interesting. IT told us that the persons with rich, proud, opinionated and violence can not all compare with diligent and kindhearted. This movie is call “The Charlie of the Chocolate.” Now let’s listen the story of this movie.
There is a boy names Charlie, he lived in a wooden house with his parents and grandparents, his grandparents were not very healthy. The whole family only made money by the father who worked in the toothpaste factory. There had a largest chocolate factory in the world nearby the place that they lived. Charlie pass through the factory everyday, and each time when he smelled the odor of chocolate , he wanted to go in to see the situation in the factory. One evening, Charlie’s grandfather told him the story about the chocolate factory and the owner : Willy Wonka.
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