幫翻譯英文賣東西的內容 20點喔~

如提~幫翻譯 不要用線上翻譯那個

文法會怪怪的 徵高手親自幫翻譯

今天我很高興介紹我的商品-優酪乳 他的功用有調節生理機能 幫助新陳代謝

當你便秘時 只要喝一罐 就能排便順暢 還在等什麼? 現在購買原價25元折價到5元 還有買3送1 快一點來買 不買你將會後悔

翻譯上面那段文字~~謝謝了 20點回報

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  • ?
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
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    我有做一些修正,讓英文的版本更順暢,感覺不會像是中文翻譯過來的.

    今天我很高興介紹我的商品-優酪乳

    Today, I am honored to have this opportunity to share with you this great drink - Yogurt Milk.

    他的功用有調節生理機能 幫助新陳代謝

    Drinking yogurt milk balances the needs of your body and improves metabolism.

    當你便秘時 只要喝一罐 就能排便順暢

    Drinking yogurt milk would also relieve you from constipation if it is an ongoing problem for you.

    還在等什麼? 現在購買原價25元折價到5元 還有買3送1

    What are you waiting for? With special promotion, you no long pay $25 for one, instead you pay only $5! And if you buy 3, you get 1 for free!

    快一點來買 不買你將會後悔

    Buy the yogurt milk and treat yourself now or regret forever!

    優酪 - Yogurt

    優酪乳 - Yogurt Milk

    願對您有幫助

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  • 1 decade ago

    Today, I'm very pleased to show you my product – yogurt.

    It has a beneficial effect on your immune system and provides good digestive health.

    Drink it, if you had constipation. It is a great help to your bowel movement.

    What are you waiting for? The original price was $25. Now we give a discount of 80%, $5 for each bottle, and also, buy 3 get 1 free.

    Buy it now, or you will regret.

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  • ?
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    今天我很高興介紹我的商品-優酪乳

    Today, I am very pleased to introduce to you my product - yoghurt drink.

    他的功用有調節生理機能 幫助新陳代謝

    It provides functions of adjust your body's biological functions and help to improve your metabolism.

    當你便秘時 只要喝一罐 就能排便順暢

    If you had constipation, just drink one can of yoghourt drink, it makes your bowel movement very smooth.

    還在等什麼? 現在購買原價25元折價到5元 還有買3送1

    What are you still waiting for? The original price was $25. Now, it is only $5. Better yet, we will give you one free, if you bought three.

    快一點來買 不買你將會後悔

    Buy it now or you'll be regret (not to buy it).

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