? asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我改英文作文

為了您訂正方便

我會在每一句前面加上數字

訂正時只要打(?)

然後再後面打上正確的寫法就可以了

如果是文法錯誤的話

請給我簡易的解析

還有

請給我寫作的建議~~謝謝喔

(1)Going swimming can be a refrshing experience to me. (2)The

pool was blue and limpidity. (3)I felt free when the cold water

touch my skin. (4)I like a bird flew in the sky. (5)It's of much

benefit to keep fit and keep healthy. (6)Every weekend, I like to go

swimming with my elder sister. (7)In morning, the air is fresh and

I saw the bird sang a song on the tree. (8)Sometimes, I felt down

and also go to take some exercise to ease off my pressure. (9)The

feeling was relaxing and refreshing for me.

Update:

很抱歉

這樣的修正方式我很難吸收

請在錯誤的句子前加上(數字)

謝謝

還有

我需要一些建議

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  • IRCA
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    (1)Swimming can be a refrshing exercise to me. (2)The

    pool is blue and limpidity. (3)I feel free when the cold water

    touches my skin. (4)I like to see a bird flying in the sky. (5)It has much benefit to keep fit and healthy. (6)On every weekend, I like to go

    swimming with my elder sister. (7)In the morning, the air is fresh and

    I see a bird singing a song in the tree. (8)Sometimes, I felt down

    and went to take some exercise to ease me of the pressure. (9)The

    feeling was relaxing and refreshing for me.

    現在 式 跟過去式 混亂使用

  • 1 decade ago

    若是敘述一個想法或習慣, 那用簡單現在是是okay的, (1)(Going可以不用) swimming can be a refr(e)shing experience to me. (2)The pool (wase改為is) blue and limpidity. (3)I (felt改為fee free when the cold water

    touch(es) my skin. (4)I (feel) like a bird flying in the sky. (5)It's of much

    benefit to keep fit and (keep可以不用) healthy. (6)Every weekend, I like to (go swimming沒有錯但我會用go to swim) with my elder sister. (7)In (the) morning, the air is fresh and (因為這裡提到一個習慣, 所以我會用簡單現在式 I see birds singing on the tree, 若是特定過去的一個早晨, 那你的寫法是可以的)

    (I saw the bird sang a song on the tree.) (8)Sometimes, I feel down

    and also go to take some exercise to ease off my pressure. (我t重組一下這一句Sometimes, I take exercises to ease off my pressure when I feel down. ) (9)The feeling was relaxing and refreshing for me. (這一句不太清楚你想表達是只做運動這件事還是游泳還是????我只是用猜的去連接最後一句They (指運動) make me feel relaxed and refreshed.)

  • 1 decade ago

    把答案改成這樣即可

    Going swimming can be a refreshing experience to me.

    The pool was blue and limpidity. I felt free when the cold water

    touches my skin. I like a bird flew in the sky. It's of much

    benefit to keep fit and keep healthy. Every weekend, I like to go

    swimming with my elder sister. In morning, the air is fresh and

    I saw the bird sang a song on the tree. Sometimes, I felt down

    and also go to take some exercise to ease off my pressure. The

    feeling was relaxing and refreshing for me.

    希望對你有幫助

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