Please help me proofread the following paragraphs in English ..thanks?

Altogether, XXX has over 60 professional service staffs who are ready to solve any customer inquires in a professional manner. Financially, we are strongly supported by our financial stability in this industry. Our financial history is sound and stable and we guarantee to deliver service and products without any frustration for long-term relationship. We also believe that stable supply chain in this market is essential for continued steady purchase orders for satisfying customer needs. Our management team always plays aggressive and builds up the solid management to monitor every single procedure from the very beginning until the end.

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  • ed
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    Paragraphs, Yes, but this is written as one.

    There are four distinct thoughts.

    My suggestions are in parenthesis.

    Altogether, XXX has over 60 professional service staffs who (stand) ready to solve any customer inquires in a professional manner.

    Financially, we are strongly supported by our financial stability in this industry. Our financial history is sound and stable and we guarantee to deliver service and products

    (in a timely manner) for long-term relationship(s).

    We also believe that (a) stable supply chain in this market is essential for continued steady (deliveries, in order to satisfy our) customer needs.

    Our management team (strives constantly to imrove and strengthen our performance and to) monitor every single procedure from the very beginning until the end.

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