喬伊斯 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

一篇英文小文章 請幫我潤文 謝謝

請高手幫我修改一下這篇文,這是我在車站來不及畫出人物速寫的有感而發

如果可以請順便指出有哪些文法錯誤好嗎?或者是有哪些寫法會更好的

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why are you always in a hurry? (為何你總是如此匆促)

why not light your step to enjoy the beautiful world? (怎麼不緩下腳步,傾聽這世界的喘息?)

I can't chapture your image in such a short time. (你的急忙使我來不及捕捉你的倩影)

girls and boys, stay for somewhile! (緩緩腳步吧)

there is someone who trying draw your poetry. (這世界會因此寫下許多美麗的詩篇)

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    why are you always in a hurry? (為何你總是如此匆促)

    ** no comment

    why not light your step to enjoy the beautiful world? (怎麼不緩下腳步,傾聽這世界的喘息?)

    **Why not slow down your pace and listen to the world breathing?

    Slow down your pace and listen to the world breathing.

    I can't chapture your image in such a short time. (你的急忙使我來不及捕捉你的倩影)

    **I can't "capture" your picture in such a hurry.

    Girls and boys, stay for somewhile! (緩緩腳步吧)

    there is someone who trying draw your poetry. (這世界會因此寫下許多美麗的詩篇)

    ** The world has written full of beautiful poetry because of you.

    Source(s): 自己
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