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yau asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文文法檢查

請英文超強的人,幫我看這個短文的文法,有哪些地方需要修正,謝謝!!

HCC is the most common malignant tumor in Taiwan.

According to Department of Health material statistics(2005),

The liver cancer for the Taiwan area main cancer cause of death, is only inferior to the lung cancer.

For our country masculine cancer first, feminine cancer second.

In the Taiwan area liver cancer high mortality rate is because the early time nearly does not have any symptom.

Sickness arose when asks to examine, the liver cancer already spreads, down to is unable to accept the positive treatment.

Generally speaking, the surgery excision is the best choice which the liver cancer treats.

On clinical, when sickness confirmation diagnosis, often because the liver cancer spread or the liver function are not good, causes to be unable the surgery to treat.

Therefore the internal medicine department treats like TACE, PEIT, RFA and the chemotherapy and so on, then took the following assistance or alleviates the choice.

Therefore the internal medicine department treats like TACE, PEIT, RFA and the chemotherapy does for the following assistance treatment or alleviates the choice.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    HCC is the most common malignant tumor in Taiwan.

    According to Department of Health material statistics(2005), the liver cancer is the main cause of death in Taiwan and only inferior to the lung cancer.

    For our country masculine cancer first, feminine cancer second.

    The reason why the mortality from the liver cancer in Taiwan is high is because there are no any symptoms in the early time.

    Sickness arose when asks to examine, the liver cancer already spreads out and is unable to accept the positive treatment.

    Generally speaking, the surgery excision is the best choice for the liver cancer treats.

    On clinical, when sickness confirmation diagnosis, often because the liver cancer spread or the liver function is not good, causes to be unable to treat by the surgery.

    Therefore the internal medicine department treats like TACE, PEIT, RFA and the chemotherapy and so on, then took the following assistance or alleviates the choice.

    我有稍微改一下,GOOD LUCK!

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  • Zippi
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Original post got a few mistakes, though

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  • saku
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    這個短文感覺很像是用翻譯機翻出來的~

    有很多地方需要改~

    語序也不太對~

    可以給我完整的中文原稿嗎~

    重新翻比較快~

    不然還要猜你原來的意思..很費時間..~

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    這一篇文章大部分是沒有什麼錯啦!

    而且這一篇文章寫的還不錯喔!

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