679522 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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Media globalization has influence and has a great impact on the world society today. It has two sides effect on the society. The positive impact is that the world can be connect together and formed a global village. However the negative impact is media globalization may blur some countries’ culture civilization and not every country has the capability to acclimatize by media globalization. The negative impacts are caused by first, culture imperialism second, the financial status of some countries. Today, every country’s situation is different some may be puissant some may be weak, therefore the powerful countries will prevailing. When they dominant the world the weak countries can only follow them and gradually their cultures and distinctness will be blurred and become bicultural country. Being bicultural is an affirmative affect, but since one is dominant; ultimately their culture will be taking over, United States is the best example. Referring to Lyons “Critics of media globalization have long held that the United States is far too powerful and that it exercises cultural imperialism over smaller nations by overwhelming them with movies and television programs produced in the United States” (Lyons, 2005, cited in McChesney, 2005). Another negative impact is each nation has different financial and economic status as a result while others are developing into a much advanced country the other in comparison will be left behind. Once they can not catch the gap between each country will be bigger. Refer to above argument; the negative aspect of media globalization may seem be destructive to the world on the other hand this is preventable. As long as people protect their culture being taking over and improve their financial and economic situation the problems are resolved. If we use different point of view to see media globalization we can discover the goodness in it.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Media globalization has "an" influence and (has) a great impact on the world society today."There are two sides of effects on the society". The positive impact is that the world can be "connected" together and formed a global village. However"," the negative impact is media globalization may blur some countries’ culture civilization, which not all country has the capability to acclimatize "the" media globalization. "Moreover", negative impacts are caused by culture imperialism and the financial status of some countries. These days, "each" country's situation is not all equal : some may be puissant while some may be weak , therefore "," the powerful countries will prevail "at last". "As" they dominant the world, the weaker countries might only follow "the stronger ones" and gradually their "culture" and distinctness will be blurred and become a bicultural country. Being bicultural is an affirmative "effect", but since one "of them" is dominant ; ultimately their culture will be taken over. United States is the best example. Referring to Lyons “Critics of media globalization have long held that the United States is far too powerful and that it exercises cultural imperialism over smaller nations by overwhelming them with movies and television programs produced in the United States” (Lyons, 2005, cited in McChesney, 2005).

    2007-08-20 18:22:34 補充:

    Another negative impact is each nation has different financial and economic status , "therefore", while other countries are developing into a "more" advanced country, the others in comparison will be left behind.

    2007-08-20 18:22:44 補充:

    Once they can not catch the gap between each country, it will get wider as the time passes. Refer to above argument; the negative aspect of media globalization may seem be destructive to the world, "but" on the other hand this is preventable.

    2007-08-20 18:23:02 補充:

    As long as people protect their culture being "taken" over and improve their financial and economic situation the problems might be resolved. If we use "a" different point of view "on" the media globalization we can discover the goodness in it.

    2007-08-20 18:23:06 補充:

    這是我自己改的。 我只幫你改文法,事實上裡面的有一些句子是中文英文, 不過算是可以理解的範圍。 只是...

    你這篇 的 solutions 好像不能對症下藥^^

    just my opinion :))

    有問題還可以問我 msn:yelloweriol520@hotmail.com

    不過前提是要選我為最佳解答^_^

    2007-08-20 18:26:23 補充:

    剛剛又看到一個錯誤

    The positive impact is that the world can be "connected" together and "form" a global village.

    !!! 還有我有改一些地方,但是沒有 標號起來, 你自己從頭隊對文章好了。 有一些我改的比較多。

    Source(s): 我摟, me
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  • 1 decade ago

    我幫您翻成中文了= =

    你看看通不通順ㄚ

    媒介全球化有影響和今天有對世界社會的巨大衝擊。它有雙方作用在社會。正面衝擊是, 世界可能是一起連接和形成了一個全球性村莊。但是負面地影響是全球化也許弄髒一些國家的文化文明的媒介並且沒有每個國家有能力適應由媒介全球化。負面地影響首先導致, 文化帝國主義其次, 一些國家的財政狀態。今天, 每個國家的情況是不同的一些也許puissant 一些也許是微弱的, 因此強有力的國家願戰勝。當他們統治世界微弱的國家能只跟隨他們和逐漸他們的文化和不同將被弄髒和成為具有兩種文化的國家。是具有兩種文化的是一個肯定的影響, 但因為你是統治的; 他們的文化最後接管, 單位。

    狀態是遠太強有力的並且那它行使文化帝國主義更小的國家由淹沒他們以電影和電視節目導致在美國"(利昂2005 年, 被援引在McChesney, 2005) 。其它負面地影響是各個國家有另外財政並且經濟地位結果當其他人開發成一個先進的國家其他在比較將被忘記。一旦他們無法捉住空白在各個國家之間更大。參見在論據之上; 全球化也許似乎這是可防止的媒介的消極方面是破壞性的對世界另一方面。只要人們保護他們的文化接管和改進他們財政並且經濟形勢問題是解決。如果我們使用另外觀點看媒介全球化我們能發現善良在它

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