幫忙改順一點~英文翻譯後不太順~~看看吧~

我找出單字後~~拼拼湊湊出來的~

但是還是不太順~可以幫我改順一點嗎

Similarly, a Japanese study11 of Kawasaki disease revealed that the

rate of a second case in a family within 1 year after onset of the first case was significantly higher than the rate in the aged matched children from the general population.

日本研究報告中顯示川崎疾病在一個家庭中第二個個案的比率比第一個個案開始之後1年之內值得注目與一般人口合適的年紀孩子的比率更高。

More importantly, more than 50% of the second cases were found within the 10 days after the onset of the first case,

更重要,超過 50% 的第二個個案在10天之內被發現在第一個情形的開始之後,

Whether the pathogenesis in this situation is related to that in Kawasaki disease or varicella-associated Kawasaki disease is elusive and awaits further clarification.

是否發病在這一些情況是相關的,在川崎病或水痘引起的川崎病是難以理解的並且等候更進一步的澄清。

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Similarly, a Japanese study11 of Kawasaki disease revealed that the rate of a second case in a family within 1 year after onset of the first case was significantly higher than the rate in the aged matched children from the general population.

    同樣地,日本一項針對十一個川崎氏症的研究顯示,同一家庭在一年內出現第二例的機率,遠高於一般年齡相仿的兒童。

    More importantly, more than 50% of the second cases were found within the 10 days after the onset of the first case,

    更重要的是,超過50%的第二例都是在首例發生後的十天內發現的,

    Whether the pathogenesis in this situation is related to that in Kawasaki disease or varicella-associated Kawasaki disease is elusive and awaits further clarification.

    這樣的發病狀況是否與川崎氏症或併發水痘川崎氏症有關,目前還不得而知,尚待進一步釐清。

    2007-08-17 11:16:49 補充:

    第一句後半段請改用此句:

    『同一家庭在出現首例後,一年內出現第二例的機率,遠高於一般年齡相仿的兒童。」

  • 1 decade ago

    我覺得兩個都翻得不錯了,但我個人覺得健身壯漢翻的比較貼切喔!

    blair的英文底子夠,但醫學背景不夠,所以翻起來較沒那麼貼切而已~

  • 1 decade ago

    Similarly, a Japanese study11 of Kawasaki disease revealed that the

    rate of a second case in a family within 1 year after onset of the first case was significantly higher than the rate in the aged matched children from the general population.

    情況相同地,在一份日本有關"川崎"這個疾病研究中,發現一個家庭在有了第一個病例的一年內再有第二個病例的比率比一般人口中同年齡的兒童(發生)的比率還要高很多。

    ps..這裡 the aged matched children 我翻成年紀相仿的兒童,但應是 age matched childen.

    More importantly, more than 50% of the second cases were found within the 10 days after the onset of the first case,Whether the pathogenesis in this situation is related to that in Kawasaki disease or varicella-associated Kawasaki disease is elusive and awaits further clarification.

    更重要的是,有超成五成的第二個病例是在發現第一個病例的十天內發病的,但發病與否(的原因)是不是跟川崎病或水痘川崎病有關仍未知而且有待進一步的驗證。

    Source(s): 自已,台科大應外系在職班學生。而且翻了20分鐘,一再思考及修正。
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