幫我看我造的句子有沒有錯誤或用法不正確的地方~

如題:

1.他非常喜歡運動

He's excessively fond of sports.

2.吸過多的菸對身體有害

Smoking an excess of smoke will harm your health.

3.他發現他比薪資表上實際列出的數字多領了一萬元

He found he had got an excess of $10,000 over what was really on the

salary form.

4.暴飲暴食增加了他的體重

Excesses add his weight.

5.那個罪犯所犯下的暴行永遠不會被原諒

The excesses commited by the criminal wiil never be forgiven.

6.別想太多

Don't think to excess.

有一句我不會翻:

過度炫耀會使人反感

Update:

我不會翻的那句,句子裡務必要有 excess 這個單字喔~拜託~

Update 2:

回JJ大大的話~

因為我的句子是看過字典上給的例句~

我再自己造一句~我也不知道通不通

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  • 1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    我用叫口語的方式接受嗎?覺得你的翻譯很繞舌...

    1.他非常喜歡運動

    He's excessively fond of sports.

    He loves sports. / He is into sports. /

    2.吸過多的菸對身體有害

    Smoking an excess of smoke will harm your health.

    Smoking is harmful to health. / (每天跟我美國老公說的話,因該不會翻錯...^__^) / Smoking is killing your health........

    3.他發現他比薪資表上實際列出的數字多領了一萬元

    He found he had got an excess of $10,000 over what was really on the

    salary form.

    He found that the money he got in his account is 10000 dollars more than shown on the pay chart/wage chart/pay receipt (sorry我不知道薪資表示只報表還是薪水單??).

    4.暴飲暴食增加了他的體重

    Excesses add his weight.

    Over eating put lots of weight on him.

    5.那個罪犯所犯下的暴行永遠不會被原諒

    The excesses commited by the criminal wiil never be forgiven.

    That criminal will never be forgiven of his crims.

    6.別想太多

    Don't think to excess.

    Don't think too much. (幹嘛搞個excess...)

    有一句我不會翻:

    過度炫耀會使人反感

    Showing off makes people sick. Show off 是炫耀

    Showing off too much makes people feeling bad.

    Source(s): 美國人的太太
  • 1 decade ago

    1. 對

    2. Smoking an excess number of cigarettes will harm your health. 這樣應該會比較好

    3.對 (應該)

    4.Excess eating added his weight.

    5.The excess crimes committed by the criminal will never be forgiven.

    6.Don't think too much excess things.

    7.Over excess of brandishing will make people uncomfortable.

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