KA CHUN asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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“Beauty” or “handsome” that I put forward the idea that a great deal of people must want to possess that. In the society, needless to say, most of people will look at other’s face at first. It is no wonder to think it but I think one is more imperative, which is our cleverness.

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In this generation, it is emphasize beautiful anything, such as faces, fashions and so on. Not only that, but also we have a lot of competition about beauty, such as miss hong kong pageant. There is no doubt that if we are beautiful and handsome, we can give a great impression to other people.

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It can be more convenience to work. On contrast, our beauty can not go with us forever. When we were above 50 years old, our skin will become bad. No matter how hard we keep, our skin also become old.

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On the other hand, our cleverness will let us become charming. I think that you will challenge this conception, but you mar ignore that knowledge also enrich our life. For instance, we can seek a work easily which has a great salary. Therefore, I agree that "knowledge is power".

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Do you take my point?

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i am F.5 student, can you give some advice ?

thx

Update 6:

問題係:靚d重要還是聰明重要d

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  • 1 decade ago
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    你係咪想我地幫你 Proof Read ?????

    In this generation, it EMPHASIZE beautiful thingS, such as pretty faces, fashions and so on. Not only that, but also a lot of competition about beauty occurs, such as miss hong kong pageant. There is no doubt that beautiful and handsome people can give good impression to others. So I can say, beauty makes us more convenienT to work.

    However, our beauty CANNOT go with us forever. When we ARE getting older, our skin GETS WORSE . No matter how MUCH EFFORT WE PUT IN IT, WE CANNOT PREVENT OUR SKIN GETTING OLD AS OUR AGES.

    On the other hand, our cleverness will let us become CONFIDENT AND charming. I think you MAY challenge this conception, but you may neglect that knowledge can enrich our life. And once you get the knowledge or a clever brain, you will not lose it , but you can gain more and more as ages go up. You will find knowledge will lead you to a successful career path rather than just offering you a chance of work. Therefore, I agree that "knowledge is power".

    後尾幫你加左啲野...

    因為你講左美貌會因年紀大而流失,所以你應該對比知識係唔會既.

    而唔好單單講知識幫你搵到高人工,應該用『短暫』同『長遠』比較。

    CE簡單的英文句子係好的,不過有時候意思未夠深入,可以draft左份中文既point,再諗啲英文應該點寫。

    其實我既英文都唔係好好(CE B, AL D),而且已經放低左書包好耐,希望可以幫到你。俾心機post多啲文出黎,問下人地意見啦。

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  • 1 decade ago

    ok agree

    but i have good website

    www.fast-beauty.6289.us and www.money128.biz

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  • Athrun
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    1 decade ago

    What is your topic? Important!

    Paragraph 2: it is clear that outlook is the major thing to be considered by the others. Nowadays, competition based on outlook such as Miss Hong Kong Pageant

    is common.

    Paragraph 3. Besides, having a good outlook may be an advantage in the world, especially in working. However, good outlook cannot be kept forever. Once we get old,

    our outlook would be greatly affected.

    2007-08-11 16:27:38 補充:

    Paragraph 4: being intelligent and enriching our knowledge are better ways for getting popular among others. Maybe you do not agree my opinion and you are still improving your personal outlook in all the time.

    2007-08-11 16:27:52 補充:

    But I strongly believe that enriching our knowledge is the best way for improving our lifestyle and it is useful eternally.

    2007-08-11 16:28:41 補充:

    As a result, I believe knowledge is power.

    2007-08-11 16:30:05 補充:

    Actually, I was a CE student in 2006-2007

    2007-08-12 13:33:08 補充:

    Reminder, you should use outlook instead of using face.In CE exam, the examiner will consider if your points and suggestions are useful and logical, if you do not understand the topic,you may score very low marks. And please make your points to be clearer and learn more vocab

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